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No offense, the -curtain- misspelling on c03p12 really pulled me out of my immersion. I tend to get bothered more when the mistakes are in thoughts than actual speech bubbles. It's also easier to notice them when text is hyphened up to fit the bubbles because I can't just glance over them to auto-form words in my head, have to piece the first part with the next.

Anyways, we've finally broken out of the angst! This is a good ride.

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Letting you know, chapter 3 has been revise, correcting both errors pointed out by readers. Also the translation in panel three of page 92 has been clarified.

Don't like "story within a story" stories, its really putting a dampener on this for me

I actually think this particular story in a story really parallels the main one and enhances (my) understanding of the main plot.

I won't comment on that, but I personally think that this story in a story really does add to the main story.

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Your are very welcome. I hope I am able to continue doing this for some time.

Page 12: instead of 'certain' it spells 'curtain'. XD

page 97: "what I am able do". I think the sentence is either "What I am able to do" or "What I am able to". it sounds weird.

Ah, the perils of doing my own proof reading. I've been warned. It should be "What I am able to do." I'll either get a revision up at some point, or include corrected pages in the 4th chapter.

Either way, if there are some misspellings, I still appreciate your work. Thank you very much. :) By the way, is chapter 4 the last chapter?

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Either way, if there are some misspellings, I still appreciate your work. Thank you very much. :) By the way, is chapter 4 the last chapter?

Yes, Chapter 4 is the final chapter of Her World.

When I took achievement tests back in school, I was several grade levels lower in spelling than anything else. I'll have to keep working at it.

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Thanks for the latest chapter! I don't really like the main character/Hakamada's tendency to get a bit too melodramatic/introspective/depressive sometimes, but Hikawa managed to be really cute somehow. This ultimately did end up quite an enjoyable story.

One thing I'm still wondering about though is what really did happen regarding Hikawa's feelings for her sensei. Did she just give up? Since she didn't really give Natsuki a straight answer I'm wondering if their relationship has really been resolved.

Incidentally, I think posts in this thread have probably made too big a deal about the spelling thing...while of course it's important to care about correct use of language, a couple typos/misspellings here and there is not really beyond even the best of scanlating teams.

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One vote for continuing The Last Uniform Vol 3 ^__^

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Thanks for working so hard on this Fly by Yuri ^-^ it was a very enjoyable read. :D

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Incidentally, I think posts in this thread have probably made too big a deal about the spelling thing...while of course it's important to care about correct use of language, a couple typos/misspellings here and there is not really beyond even the best of scanlating teams.

...Seriously now.

Weird series, but managed to be quite concise for a Hakamada Mera work. Great work on the scanlation!

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One thing I'm still wondering about though is what really did happen regarding Hikawa's feelings for her sensei. Did she just give up? Since she didn't really give Natsuki a straight answer I'm wondering if their relationship has really been resolved.

It seems that Hakamada-sensei left this one up to the reader. My own thoughts go in two directions.

One: Not seeing any chance with Yoneya, Hikawa found herself falling for Natsuki, who clearly liked her writing and showed Hikawa some attention and kindness (until you know) and then became obsessed with Hikawa.

Or two: Perhaps Hikawa's feelings toward Yoneya were more admiration and appreciation, which Natsuki mistook for love.

These are only guesses and I'm sure there are other possibilities.

Edit: If there are spelling errors, omitted words, etc. I'd just as soon know about them so that I can correct them and/or avoid them in the future. Now that I am an uploader, I can fix it as soon as I see it pointed out. Since I am doing my own proofreading, it is fairly easy to overlook something.

Edit two: Of course that could also be handled with an e-mail if preferred. My e-mail is posted in the credits and on this reader.

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joined Apr 19, 2013

The story line is becoming very interesting O.o can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store for us :)
thank you for all the hard work and time you have put into this ^-^

@sunshine:this is pretty off-topic but I REALLY can't help but mention this, but is your profile pic rizzoli and isles O.o?

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The story line is becoming very interesting O.o can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store for us :)
thank you for all the hard work and time you have put into this ^-^

@sunshine:this is pretty off-topic but I REALLY can't help but mention this, but is your profile pic rizzoli and isles O.o?

Sunshine's profile picture is from Psycho-Pass.

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pg 142
"and being in love her, are my world" I think is being in love with her, right?

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Sofar this is shaping up to be one of Hakamadas better stories, altough as she's usualy bad at endings i feel like i shouldn't judge it yet. But I still have to say that I quite like the simpleness of her art.

You were right. That ending felt incomplete.

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i'm always interested in mera's works, but i see not too many people thinks like this

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Hmmm.. Why do I get the feeling that it has an extra?

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pg 142
"and being in love her, are my world" I think is being in love with her, right?

This was split across both boxes "Her world, and being in love with her, are my world." Grammar is not my strong point, but I think the "are" refers to the two preceding clauses. Perhaps I should have reversed the clause order, then it would be clear.

edit: I clarified it and updated it. box 1: "Both her world," box 2: "and being in love with her are my world."
I clearly shouldn't do it this way very often, or there will be a bunch of versions floating around. In the future, unless it's a simple error, if things like this show up, I'll save them up for a revision once no more are likely to turn up.

Hmmm.. Why do I get the feeling that it has an extra?

That would be nice, perhaps there is something posted at the Comic Ryu web site (chapter 4 was a web comic).

One vote for continuing The Last Uniform Vol 3 ^__^

With low voter turnout and most reader not realizing that there was an election, perhaps one vote is enough. It would be nice to get one or two more votes before deciding to do it. Still, I've read some of it in Japanese, and it looks very interesting, so I want to do it anyway or I wouldn't have brought it up. It sure seems like Seven Seas will never do it after losing money on the first two volumes. Apparently, they never even licensed the third volume.

By the way, I never even new the American release existed until recently, or I would certainly have done my part to put it in the black.

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It would be nice to get one or two more votes before deciding to do it.

Then consider this another one.

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It would be nice to get one or two more votes before deciding to do it.

And another one

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i would be happy to read any Yuri* manga as long as it doesn't involve M**

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Ch4 P127, upper-right panel: The two hiraganas means only "plop", not an SFX of spacing out.

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I'll take that as three more votes, so I'll definitely plan on doing The Last Uniform vol. 3. I will plan on doing it after Romance Girls File, though I might move one or two chapters forward in my schedule at some point. Also, I continue to reserve the right to squeeze in a one shot or two, if something really catches my eye.

Of course I'll be moving the Morinage Milk story to the front of my schedule just as soon as I get my hands on it. (Probably early to mid August.)

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Ch4 P127, upper-right panel: The two hiraganas means only "plop", not an SFX of spacing out.

Ah... I see; that is a single column of three characters with wide spacing rather than two separate sound effects. Thanks for pointing that out.

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it's not clearly at all, gosh, so confused T^T i hate open ending T^T

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it's not clearly at all, gosh, so confused T^T i hate open ending T^T

It was a one side love... What can she do? she had a nice summer memory out of it and a broken heart.... Oh the youth.

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joined Feb 2, 2013

i too vote for the last uniform, just in case it wasn't clear

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