I was talking about the font size. It was called header in the forum markdown. Heading 4 is pretty big for the effect I wanted.
intro
Remove the "the" in the Central Station bubble.
segment 1, p5
Let me see her father's work.
p5
The 60 looks like Go.
segment 2, p3 bubble 1
You don't need the "You" before "Be careful".
p4 panel 4 bubble 2
chic > chick
p4 last panel
You're just hitting on her.
p6
I think just one "hey" would suffice. Sounds like pep talk.
I don't have a choice...
Intro is superb. Segment 1 and 2 are okay.
last edited at Jul 5, 2017 2:22AM