That was sweet :)

Izumiya Otoha style makes it hard to follow what the hell is going on when H kicks in. Too harsh on the black and too much close-ups.

Too... ordinary. I saw stories like this so many times that it seems so boring now.
"I will graduate and move to another city but our love blah blah blah..."

last edited at Jun 2, 2014 2:22PM

I love happy ends <3

it's good for what it is, just a nsfw oneshot

Too... ordinary. I saw stories like this so many times that it seems so boring now.
"I will graduate and move to another city but our love blah blah blah..."

+1.

Ohhhh... that was sweet in a way..... Hahaha.....

some anon in 4chan did some cropping and poor leveling https://mega.co.nz/#!5gB30JbT!DO8BWRn_ppKJnhNbOTZBFVo3RVQghAXWqLAwiEt57eA

Dawww

Sweet..... I guess I like the art tho more than the story

last edited at Jun 3, 2014 3:55AM

at first I was like meh probably just sex and then that ending dawww

That was sweet :)

Izumiya Otoha style makes it hard to follow what the hell is going on when H kicks in. Too harsh on the black and too much close-ups.

I was thinking the same thing ; ;

I love Otoha's art. Since I read Shinigami Alice I fell in love with both her art and story.
This is just a short Yuri. You can say it not mean much or ordinary . But with me, it still Special . ^^

i'd get so pissed if someone started ripping my tights, even in the heat of some nasty shit-- like, excuse me bitch but what am i supposed to do now w these ripped up tights? do you know how much these cost??

That was sweet :)

Izumiya Otoha style makes it hard to follow what the hell is going on when H kicks in. Too harsh on the black and too much close-ups.

Im glad I wasnt the only one goint wtf. lol

Still it was a sweet story. <3 Happy yuri is best yuri!

i'd get so pissed if someone started ripping my tights, even in the heat of some nasty shit-- like, excuse me bitch but what am i supposed to do now w these ripped up tights? do you know how much these cost??

Well, keep in mind they are part of the school uniform she will no longer be wearing after that day - although one does wonder how she managed to get off-campus with them in that state.

Anyway, I personally never get tired of happy endings, which is why I thought this was just great.

last edited at Jun 5, 2014 5:34AM

oh my god i love this.

the angst.
the art.
the sex.
the ending.

beautiful.

i am assuming its title is "startline" because they are beginning a new relationship. yes, more angsty fluff. idc what you say haha i just. i just love this.

i'd get so pissed if someone started ripping my tights, even in the heat of some nasty shit-- like, excuse me bitch but what am i supposed to do now w these ripped up tights? do you know how much these cost??

Well, keep in mind they are part of the school uniform she will no longer be wearing after that day - although one does wonder how she managed to get off-campus with them in that state.

I think her skirt covered it up... Seems like it would.
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/startline#11

Too... ordinary. I saw stories like this so many times that it seems so boring now.
"I will graduate and move to another city but our love blah blah blah..."

The scenario you found ordinary is pretty rare in yuri. Actually, it downright hardly ever happens. This is the only story so far with the kouhai-senpai graduating narrative that does not end in "she'll grow out of this 'phase'" or "this is a naive memory of youth I won't forget." (Some yuri stories just love spiralling into that angst...)

I know this is an old comment in an old discussion but I just can't help pointing this out. I know this is just porn, but still it is one of the rare stories (I don't know if there are others like this, will be glad to get more examples) that got over the tantalizing "girls liking girls is a phase" mindset in Japan. That mindset is still going pretty strong even in the present (it is used to justify gaybaiting...).

So yeah... I'm really happy they got a hopeful ending haha.

Too... ordinary. I saw stories like this so many times that it seems so boring now.
"I will graduate and move to another city but our love blah blah blah..."

The scenario you found ordinary is pretty rare in yuri. Actually, it downright hardly ever happens. This is the only story so far with the kouhai-senpai graduating narrative that does not end in "she'll grow out of this 'phase'" or "this is a naive memory of youth I won't forget." (Some yuri stories just love spiralling into that angst...)

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/full_of_memories#3
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/ill_send_her_home_on_the_last_train
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/this_is_a_fake

And it may not be sempai-kouhai, but come on now!

https://dynasty-scans.com/series/yamada_to_kase_san

last edited at Jan 7, 2018 2:50PM

Too... ordinary. I saw stories like this so many times that it seems so boring now.
"I will graduate and move to another city but our love blah blah blah..."

The scenario you found ordinary is pretty rare in yuri. Actually, it downright hardly ever happens. This is the only story so far with the kouhai-senpai graduating narrative that does not end in "she'll grow out of this 'phase'" or "this is a naive memory of youth I won't forget." (Some yuri stories just love spiralling into that angst...)

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/full_of_memories#3
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/ill_send_her_home_on_the_last_train
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/this_is_a_fake

And it may not be sempai-kouhai, but come on now!

https://dynasty-scans.com/series/yamada_to_kase_san

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/the_seasons_that_follow_goodbye#1

Also this.

Thanks, looks like I missed out a lot here, glad the happy ends aren't as spare as I thought.

Too... ordinary. I saw stories like this so many times that it seems so boring now.
"I will graduate and move to another city but our love blah blah blah..."

The scenario you found ordinary is pretty rare in yuri. Actually, it downright hardly ever happens. This is the only story so far with the kouhai-senpai graduating narrative that does not end in "she'll grow out of this 'phase'" or "this is a naive memory of youth I won't forget." (Some yuri stories just love spiralling into that angst...)

I know this is an old comment in an old discussion but I just can't help pointing this out. I know this is just porn, but still it is one of the rare stories (I don't know if there are others like this, will be glad to get more examples) that got over the tantalizing "girls liking girls is a phase" mindset in Japan. That mindset is still going pretty strong even in the present (it is used to justify gaybaiting...).

So yeah... I'm really happy they got a hopeful ending haha.

Actually, a lot of people DO complain about how people graduating or moving makes them or their lover act like it's the end all be all (hope I'm using that right) to their relationship, but this one just says, "Hey, we can text. And I'll be visiting you alot. So no worries, because tgat's what it means to be in love." It's not a rare resolution, but it is an appreciated one