For some reason, I thought the second chapter was a one-shot, and when I got to the last page, I was like "That's it? That cliffhanger is so random"
And then I realized that it was a series and I accidentally skipped the first chapter :P

Is this entire series just gonna be flashbacks to that one night? If so, that would actually be hilarious.

Chapter 4 amped up the drama so much that it's hard to read with a straight face xD

Every chapter is a flashback to the same event again and again xd

...Bruh this is kinda dumb if they're going for a serious tone, however reading the comments, if the whole series is actually just gonna be like that as a big joke, I'd be more than happy lmao

This scenario would be kinda better if she asked Shion to have sex before she got drunk but she didn't, it was after. Having sex with a drunk person ain't consensual bro.

Btw, I don't really care about consent in fiction but people saying this is consensual don't know what consent means.

I want shion just get out of the way and leave her as a friend. She'll Dodge a huge bullet

haruhi two time travel boogaloo

Well, that explains a lot...

I know this is supposed to be dramatic and all but, I keep laughing

Same. I know that ch. 4-5 are supposed to be the height of drama, but they are so melodramatic that I just found them a little funny.

The cover makes me happy :)

All's well that ends well.

Did this all happen in a day? Or did they fuck last night again? I’m confused.

Oh my god I cannot take this one seriously.

Is it weird to say that I liked it except for the sex scenes?

So I am confused. We had a flashback to them explicitly having sex in the karaoke parlor, but now it seems like they're suggesting they didn't do anything until they got to the hotel? Or Shion was like....trying to hypnotize or reprogram her memories? Chapter 4 just seems really weird, and honestly mostly makes Shion look -worse-?

Either way, yeah, this ended up pretty problematic in the end.

It's not okay to get your friend drunk and take advantage of them!

...Unless of course they decide after the fact that they're happy about it, Then hooray, girlfriends!

Yeah, no, it still isn't okay. Sure, it's not -as bad- if Nozomi literally asked her to do it, but Shion still should have -turned down- the girl who was too drunk to make an informed decision.

Wow, that resolution came very quickly (no pun intended... just kidding).

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Yeah that resolve itself quickly. Overall an okay read. Its sexy erotic yuri, and I got that with an okay story I guess.

Aah! I love happy ending! ^^ btw, why they always end up in a love hotel lol

Well, that was a fun read, the drunk sex was still probably a bad idea, but it all worked out in the end, so that’s all I could’ve asked for. Thank you, scanalators.

Did this all happen in a day? Or did they fuck last night again? I’m confused.

They fucked 2 times last night. Once at the karaoke place, once at the hotel. The sex in this chapter took place in the present, after Nozomi invited Shion back to the same karaoke bar to discuss things, making it their 3rd time in 48 hours and first time today.

“I just so happened to fall in love with you.” What a convenient excuse. Wtf I can’t take this shit seriously. <__>

It feels like a long oneshot that got divided into 5 chapters

Sweet ending.

You cant give consent while drunk dammit. How is this... aghh... If you were in a bar, and a stranger blasted off their ass wants you to fuck them, you simply don't !!! That's someone using alcohol so that they dont have to be accountable for their choices, its self-harm.

It's like this shit in the sims: "Apologize... In bed"

This was such a dumb read, even dumber than that tentacle/futa raping plant story

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