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brimstone_cat
joined Jul 1, 2019

i felt dirty the whole time while reading this. but for a first yagakimi doujin, its pretty good; at least nothing was fucked up.

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joined Jan 24, 2018

Kinda fitting this came up RIGHT AFTER the characters expressed interest in exactly this. Also, “Yuutrients”? Please go to jail.

breaks neck nodding in agreement

joined Nov 5, 2018

Lol this was so disgusting

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

I told you all that touko is a top but noooo you don’t want to listen!

Considering the time this takes place, though... It's right after Yuu finally fell for Touko as well and she's doing her best to behave as if she has no feelings for her. Not really the situation to take charge from the start and blow things, but in the end she still does what she can anyway to get that taste of Touko.

Yuriloveisbestlove
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joined Feb 15, 2019

I had doubts about this but the artist did a pretty good job of this, it's believable and I kinda wish it were cannon.

Yuri_Crazed-dotcom
joined Apr 2, 2018

The tag should really say rape. That's the only problem.

Quiescent-Rose
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joined Aug 13, 2018

Kinda fitting this came up RIGHT AFTER the characters expressed interest in exactly this. Also, “Yuutrients”? Please go to jail.

侑成分が全然足りない
Please tell me if you can come up with a better line, because that's pretty much what she's saying.It was also quite clever.

Don’t worry, this is single handedly the best line I’ve seen in months. Y’all complaining can’t appreciate just how great this pun is.

last edited at Jul 2, 2019 3:38AM

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joined Jul 29, 2017

The tag should really say rape. That's the only problem.

You misspelled “reversal.”

As indicated by Yuu’s “I’m not upset or anything” after Youko’s apology for losing control, this was just like every other instance in the actual series of Touko pushing boundaries and Yuu ultimately being fine with it.

Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018

I had doubts about this but the artist did a pretty good job of this, it's believable and I kinda wish it were cannon.

It makes no sense in the actual series though and would completely ruin it, so no thanks.

last edited at Jul 2, 2019 4:13AM

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joined Jul 29, 2017

I had doubts about this but the artist did a pretty good job of this, it's believable and I kinda wish it were cannon.

It makes no sense in the actual series though and would completely ruin it, so not thanks.

It would as “Return to the Equipment Room,” though.

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

^Not a bad idea, but it wouldn't work without disregarding some of the dialogue which undeniably establishes that this takes place after the sports festival while Touko is still in the student council, which she would not be anymore the next year.

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joined Jul 29, 2017

^Not a bad idea, but it wouldn't work without disregarding some of the dialogue which undeniably establishes that this takes place after the sports festival while Touko is still in the student council, which she would not be anymore the next year.

Work with me here—it would totally work as couples cosplay. (“Senpai, remember that time in the equipment room? What did you really want to do?”)

If I had a dime for every yuri couple to request their old school uniforms in the bedroom . . .

Eivhbyw
joined Aug 26, 2018

I had doubts about this but the artist did a pretty good job of this, it's believable and I kinda wish it were cannon.

It makes no sense in the actual series though and would completely ruin it, so no thanks.

It would as “Return to the Equipment Room,” though.

Touko sure loves acting. But to think Yuu would be so perfect in recreating her past denial. What an amazing "play".

last edited at Jul 2, 2019 4:14AM

Ykn1
joined Dec 20, 2018

^The utter improbability of it aside, Yuu is very familiar with that role. ;)

Don't%20forget%20the%20best%20girl
joined Jul 22, 2018

HERE WE GO

author is horny too

last edited at Jul 2, 2019 8:35PM

That%20face
joined Mar 26, 2016

The actual panel art was significantly better than I thought it would be considering the quality of the cover art. A case of literally don't judge a book by its cover

joined Jun 12, 2019

Yuutrients haha that was cute. I lowkey loved this askdkfk after the last chapter this seems fitting omg

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joined Nov 21, 2014

No. I say no.

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joined Jul 7, 2017

SEEMS LEGIT

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joined Jun 27, 2019

I dunno why but it felt like it's a comedy. I couldn't stop giggling as I read it.

Img_0215
joined Jul 29, 2017

I dunno why but it felt like it's a comedy. I couldn't stop giggling as I read it.

Because sex is funny.

LesbianPirate
Shithead
joined Oct 23, 2018

THAT'S A WHOLE VAGINA

Gudako%20profile
joined Nov 9, 2015

Canon improbability aside...
Touko being someone who tops "first" then gets switched by Yuu /easily/ is definitely something I think would happen more than often.

joined Aug 10, 2020

no nipples

XD

joined Aug 10, 2020

Me questioning why they didn’t use 2 fingers

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