oooh this art style is gorgeous, and they've got a really good handle on not just characters but backgrounds and panel composition too! Love a good supernatural mystery, I'm on board
first 10 seconds and someone already almost gets hit by a car. what a good start to any story (sarcastic voice)
You may be sarcastic, but I find the story start quite successful. While the pacing is indeed choppy, the rapid escalation of problems the protagonists face within the first two chapters is good writing. Most webcomics would waffle around with exposition and introductions for 10 chapters before finding their legs, but this one goes straight for the first crisis. It's almost refreshing.
I don't know how to describe this, but the juxtaposition of the art and relatively serious plot with the comedy feels watching Death Stranding and seeing a can of Mountain Dew. And to be clear I enjoyed the most recent ch. 3, I thought the pacing was good.