For a moment there I thought that was Komichi on the second page

This one was great!

I liked that one a lot

I like this a lot, the story and the art was so beautiful!

The dad and the teacher need to hop into a volcano. I hope these two can have a happy future together at least, and thanks for the translation!

Minor thing I saw is I think this page needs a "be" for the bottom bubble, I'll be more careful.
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/etoile_of_the_garden#7

This isn’t the first time Hoshino Kanata has made peak, and we still don’t even have a series from them :(

this is soooo classic yuri. i'm amazed it wasn't written in the 70s-80s. beautiful, too. what a treasure

Peak

For whatever reason at the very beginning I already know Sakurako is the dancer.

I haven't seen the original Japanese, but "Honjyou" doesn't look at that correct a transliteration to me.

I also wonder whether she needs glasses herself, seeing how that dancer is so obviously Sakurako.

Nice, too bad no one shanked the shitty father.

aaahh, so beautiful, really does remind you of classic shoujo... i immediately need 100 more chapters

this is soooo classic yuri. i'm amazed it wasn't written in the 70s-80s. beautiful, too. what a treasure

and as back then XD the subtext is all you get

omg why are most yuri oneshots soo good?! i want a whole series about this i love it

omg why are most yuri oneshots soo good?!

Because they don't overstay their welcome. ^^

this is soooo classic yuri. i'm amazed it wasn't written in the 70s-80s. beautiful, too. what a treasure

and as back then XD the subtext is all you get

Then you die / and/ or forced into a loveless marriage/ die in childbirth, die slowly of depression/alcoholism/assorted self harm.