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joined Apr 5, 2023

This was really nice and the art very cute, thanks for the upload!
"It's not like I'm gonna get eaten or anythin'." Sure...

Dc4181ab-be73-4839-b684-7476d3ac05f5
joined Oct 24, 2018

damn this is brutal

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joined Jul 21, 2021

Huh. I'm not confident what's going on in this one. I like it but it has this really weird vibe. Huh. that last line is pretty menacing too.

joined May 23, 2015

Huh. I'm not confident what's going on in this one. I like it but it has this really weird vibe. Huh. that last line is pretty menacing too.

"I invited them to my home so they'd never leave."... who did she just invite in?

Violin
joined Feb 10, 2022

Well, you never know. Maybe they'll work things out in the end?

joined Aug 13, 2023

Ah, "increased greed" and all... oh well, I'm sure it'll work out.

last edited at Aug 3, 2024 7:42PM

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joined Jul 21, 2021

Huh. I'm not confident what's going on in this one. I like it but it has this really weird vibe. Huh. that last line is pretty menacing too.

"I invited them to my home so they'd never leave."... who did she just invite in?

I got that part. the text really seems to be implying something awful is gonna happen but Alice isn't acting particularly out of character? Is the story implying Marisa is actually gonna get eaten??

Fishbowl%20man
joined May 6, 2018

This author has written really wholesome MariAli, but I also remember another doujin where Alice was really torn, because she enjoyed Marisa's company, but she normally had a policy of collecting any human samples she could get for her research.
So if they say this doujin's Alice is bad news, she probably is. But then they also say this is a good ending from a MariAli perspective and that's the one I'm reading it from.

Anyway, I really like this kind of story where you never really find out how far the dark undertone goes. Yandere Alice is pretty common, but it's neat to see a version that would actually fool anybody.

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joined Nov 24, 2016

Well that was unsettling.

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joined Nov 19, 2022

Huh. I'm not confident what's going on in this one. I like it but it has this really weird vibe. Huh. that last line is pretty menacing too.

"I invited them to my home so they'd never leave."... who did she just invite in?

I got that part. the text really seems to be implying something awful is gonna happen but Alice isn't acting particularly out of character? Is the story implying Marisa is actually gonna get eaten??

Oh she's gonna get eaten alright ^^

Chimera
joined Aug 2, 2023

Hey, a non-angsty MariAlice story!

I can't exactly tell her... That I'm feeling unsafe being with her...

Nevermind then.

satoremienjoyer
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joined Jun 25, 2024

In the end, she was eaten alright

joined Feb 2, 2021

Alice gonna vore Marisa

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