Overall I liked it, but it did feel as though there was a bit too much crammed in too few pages.
and the person the singer went to see on their own, with the whole twister thing
I was very confused about this as well. I think that was the same person as the president...? Which kinda makes me wonder what or if anything happened with the president in the first place...? (other than twister, that is lol.) I don't know, it was confusing.
Anyway, it was interesting and I really liked the character designs, they were distinctive and cool (and cute, the protagonist at least).
But I was left with a few questions unanswered. Like, has Seira been wearing mascara/eyeliner ever since she was ten ? Or am I supposed to think she isn't wearing any now? This was obviously one of the most prominent issues of this manga, almost ruined the experience for me tbh... Like, I can understand having a bit of a rushed ending and mysterious twister activities and subplots that barely got any time to be explored, but you can't be all wishy-washy about eyeliner.