Homupression as always

This was depressing but in a good way. The way she got to vent with Sayaka made me cry a bit lol.

FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

it really went from depressing as fuck, to wholesome and then depressing as fuck again.

This really makes sense though, worlds'/loops like these are the ones that help Homura stay relatively sane.

Praise to whoever translated this. This had a fuck ton of text.

A massive fuckton of text, indeed. This is insanely high effort for a Madoka doujin about Homura being sad, holy shit.

Did not expected to cry under my covers at almost 1 in the morning.

But then again this is Madoka Magica.

pg 26, "propensity to to try" -> "propensity to try"

pg 78, "then I... will no longer any resentment for the sacrifices I am bidden to make."

feels like a word is missing.

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This feels like it could be canon

This was phenomenal; easily a favorite Madoka doujin. Thanks to the translator for picking up such a heavy piece

This was so good

it was always kinda vague in the original whether the timelines that Homura abandons continue to exist after she's gone

I do like the implications of all the fucked up or fixed worlds just continuing

Yeah this definitely feels like the missing pieces of the original manga, sooo good

Instant favorite. The first year magical girl trio is always very good.
This doujin is like the reverse of my favorite line in Magia Record said by Madoka:

I promise to save Homura! So Sayaka, you save me! And then someday, Homura will save you, too!

This is actually pretty great, especially for fanfiction.

Wonderful execution of interesting concept.