I was really confused the first team I read it, thought the 2 black haired girls were the same person... Definitely better than the previous one, still not great IMO. (dat graduation cliche)

A bit too messy with time IMO. Hard to keep track of what happened when.
Especially since it seems there's even a time not shown, "five years ago" from p11

last edited at Aug 3, 2014 8:09PM

Bah, well at least we did not en with a sudden heartbroken story this time. Instead this one mends the broken heart of the MC.

I liked it........to an extent, execution wasn't great imo, next release is special though, it actually made me NOT completely hate devil homura, though she was still creepy as shit in it though, reeks a bit too much of Stockholm syndrome

I enjoyed it once I figured out what was going on with the flashbacks. It doesn't read easily at all, but in a weird way it reminds me of Ootomo Megane's work. There's a certain distance about the storytelling, similar as well to Shimura Takako.

i found this story a little entrancing...but that's from like a symbolistic view...
all in all a good read....
interested to see what else this artist come out with ^_^

I also couldn't tell them apart until about half way through. I kind of wish the author didn't make the only difference between them be the glasses and the kouhai's shyness vs the senpai's carefree attitude, but I can possibly see the reasoning for it so I think it's understandable. But like everyone said, I'm glad to see this story end on a high note.

last edited at Aug 3, 2014 10:31PM

sloppy work, imo . . .

Dunno about you guys, but i really like the art and stuff. It's interesting.. I hope Yuu will be able to like romance now.

I liked it but i will add my voice to the consensus that its tad confusing interweaving two time frames with 2 girls who look similar. A bit more thought should of gone in at the planning stage- like making the 2 girls look different.

Wow, I really like it. Just don't know what to add. I really liked it. It's great.

There's a certain distance about the storytelling, similar as well to Shimura Takako.

Yeah, the cover made me think it was an Aoi Hana doujin as well. I really dug this, makes me wonder what Shimura porn would look like nowadays.

Anyway, I found this excellent. If you don't give your undivided attention I do see how it could be confusing, but I didn't find that to be the case personally.

More original yuri is always good, anyway.

I liked this. Definitely it had a better ending. And throughout the beginning Yuu kept mentioning some words with past tense to them, so immediately I knew that the relationship with Rumi didn't work out as they showed with the flashbacks. But I'm happy to know that Yuu has someone she likes, and like she mentioned "someone to say I love you" really does say that her new relationship with her kouhai will last and (hopefully) its serious.
And I also had the same thought about the cover, it definitely looks like Aoi Hana.

Nice ending, I was scared the cute glasses girl would be left alone after Yuu had her way with her. The art is cute too.

Love bittersweet and glasses are always so damn goood !

I thought it was absolutely fantastic! Well drawn. Perhaps a bit cliche but good nonetheless. Hell, if a cute girl like that had a crush on me, I would've invited her over to have some action as well. Too bad I'm oblivious to know most of the time.

last edited at Aug 18, 2014 6:51PM

well the 2 girls look so similar for a reason. yuu probably only liked her at first because of that similarity. especially since until she hooked up with the kouhai that her previous love didn't really seem like it was resolved to her.

How cute... I thought it was a sad ending but I am glad was wrong...

Is it just me or did anyone else interpret these two lines differently lmao
I ended up making an inside joke with my friends about it
"I like your eyes. Close them."

http://i.cubeupload.com/t1x12M.png

Is it just me or did anyone else interpret these two lines differently lmao
I ended up making an inside joke with my friends about it
"I like your eyes. Close them."

Me too LMAO

last edited at Nov 26, 2017 11:06PM by Nezchan

http://i.cubeupload.com/t1x12M.png

Is it just me or did anyone else interpret these two lines differently lmao
I ended up making an inside joke with my friends about it
"I like your eyes. Close them."

Me too LMAO

same hahaha

Still cracks me up every time I reread this lmao

last edited at Jan 20, 2020 5:43PM

Plus 100 for including pubic hair, am I the only one that thinks that's sexy?