Fly by Yuri
joined Mar 29, 2013
The fist plot twist is signaled by the blond dropping out of character on page 3, then kissing the black haired girl to distract her.
But the only foreshadowing of the second plot twist is the stare the black haired girl gives on page 2 after being told "Though it's only by marriage, we're still mother and daughter..." And nobody will pick up on that hint unless they already know.
How was that a comdey?
It makes me laugh in several place; isn't that a comedy? If most people think it isn't I could change my mind.
last edited at Nov 4, 2014 10:27PM