Here's some improvements I would make:
Add some small drama to season 1
Stop right here, there no need to add drama unnecessarily.
Introduce Naru in season 1 and make her a inherently nice person (She can be one of Umiko's aides or whatever)
Except Naru is a nice person after the whole code war. She is just insecure because it's her last chance to do what she love before going back to the inn and there no need to introduce that much of new employees in the first season.
Remove Momo completely from the story
As much as i think the current situation is partially her fault, no. Momo was needed to give Aoba some rival after Kou's depart to France.
Yun wins the design competition on her first try
That may the only point i agree on.
Yun tries to climb up the corporate ladder because she wants to be able to take better care of her little siblings
I don't think it's related at all. We never see Yun struggle one bit with her siblings so no.
There roughly one or 2 points i can agree on. All the others made no sense at all.
AH!! There's also Nene trying to make games from scratch, remember? who knows, they could start from 0 just them making indie games together o.o) that would be nice too.
Yeah no, in my opinion they could have ended after Kou's depart for France. I know the dodgeball project is just a side project so it's not too much risk for them but god that start horribly. Choose Hajime's project with no experience, ok why not but don't help her to choose the characters designs was stupid. It feel like Kou going to France is a bad move so far, Eagle seem to struggle .
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