Im crying. Why did it have to end there :’(
I don't know, for some reason that struck me as very erotic - and thinking about it, if it had gone on another few pages, I'm thinking it would be LESS so.
What makes it erotic was the build up and anticipation, the silence and looks, the blushing, the escalation to touching saying you can do what you want.. and then leaving them in there unseen to do naughty things - even if though we don't see it we can imagine what they are doing, or imagine what noises you might hear in that bathroom, even if it didn't go beyond groping, like rustling clothes and heavy breathing..
I think if it had a bit more, it would be just another sex scene like hundreds of others.. Though if the artist did it right that could of been very sexy too ofcourse..
Just trying to figure out why in this case, and some others I've seen, ending just short of showing everything really works.
Another that comes to mind is this Saki doujin with Touka x Hajime
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/if_touka_allows_it_will_the_nagano_style_disappear#1
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