Well at least the drama was sorted, still wondering what the entire point was. oh well.
to get them to confess their feeling for each other
True, naturally, but the whole drama itself felt force, the way Marie acted a chapter prior was still very silly, and her master still doesn't even know what happens. It's all resulted now, sure, but this was was still really confusing, I guess we needed some form of tension and drama in it, though.
On the flip-side having no idea what happened and closing the door on the one you’re claiming to be friends with isn’t exactly helping, Marie also knows the reason Mel ran away and knows it’s not abuse, so she has either not told her master everything or lied about something, because Mel’s master simply wants to talk it out and Marie is the one preventing that because she thinks it’s better this way. Assuming that Mels master has hurt her, without really taking into consideration what it actually means if Mel truly loves her.
It’s not a dick move but she’s also basically told her master to keep Mel’s away without explaining it which is hurting both Mel and her master really; logically, if Marie’s master knew the reason (That Marie actually knows) why Mel ran away, she wouldn’t close the door like that. At least I don’t feel she would, it would be silly. Marie getting hurt over it just makes it even more worse because you can’t really blame Mels master for that, but Marie probably does/
It’s what makes this sudden shift feel so forced.
Edit: I should add I understand fully why Marie is doing it, but she has made the situation worse.
This story , is cute and all but it have a f***ing dark side that is not developped and so kinda don't like that.
Yeah, I feel the dark side stuff is way too forced here, and Marie's attitude is in good heart, but it's also coming off as silly and basically makes the entire thing worse. Mel's master would simply just have to explain herself and talk about it, yet it just went off the rails with this.
I still enjoy it and didn't really want to think too much into it, but the dark shift has just killed it a little for me I guess?