i like that its the afterglow. usually we only see the lead-up to the sex and then the sex if its that kind of doujin. hit me up with some more of that cuddling and spooning shit

Something about the font annoyed me, but I dunno what exactly. But despite that, this was a really cute comic. Definitely agree about the afterglow and cuddling comics being nice.

I agree about the font. I'd much prefer typical manga font. The art's also kinda weird. The style reminds me of the style that looks like drawn-over photos. The shot on the last page that's the close-up of Pearl's face is really good, but the rest of it just looks off to me. Otherwise, I'm definitely a fan of this story. Love those aftercare scenes to death. I think there's a movie called After Sex that is just a string of vignettes depicting couples after intercourse. Good shit, I tell ya.

Something about the font annoyed me, but I dunno what exactly. But despite that, this was a really cute comic. Definitely agree about the afterglow and cuddling comics being nice.

Not the usual manga/comic fonts.
Font is too thick for normal conservation.
No uppercase first letter.
No white borderline for words that are out of bubble speech.
And sometimes off center.

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I actually find most art for Splatoon to be really creepy lol! The octolings don't work as well as squidlings for me - they look bad/creepy like they are balancing an dead octopus on their head rather than it being like hair. And The cross eyes some chrs have looks weird in a bad way - and the black eye mask makes them look like deranged clowns etc.

Eromame is one of the few artists who I think can always make them look nice and cute!

Looking past that, I did still like this doujin.

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Mee like something different~

From the looks of it it seems like the artist tried to translate it themselves, which would explain the off grammar and typeset.

Yes!!! So happy to see this! There is not nearly enough art of Pearl x Marina. I think they make an amazing couple

This made my mediocre day into a great day, now I'm gonna start paying more attention to this artist.

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Marina was fine, but Pearl's character felt slightly off. Also Pearl's body looked too big and stocky, kinda masculine. She's supposed to be small and cute.

Something about the font annoyed me, but I dunno what exactly. But despite that, this was a really cute comic. Definitely agree about the afterglow and cuddling comics being nice.

For me, it was the use of 'OMG' and 'BBY' and the like. It didn't annoy me too much, but it did get on my nerves slightly

This is truly blessing ( ´ ∀ ` )

Something about the font annoyed me, but I dunno what exactly. But despite that, this was a really cute comic. Definitely agree about the afterglow and cuddling comics being nice.

You're right. It should've been written in comic sans