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joined Aug 24, 2016

don't tell us they had sex show it

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joined Jan 17, 2017

Bazinga

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joined Sep 27, 2017

don't tell us they had sex show it

It's been while since I've posted on the forums so I'm not certain if we're allowed to post links but here's the wiki page on Danbooru for "They had lots of sex afterwards":
https://danbooru.donmai.us/wiki_pages/51624

It's a humorous way of concluding a story and confirming that they had sex. It's in my opinion a perfectly fine thing to use when writing. Maybe sex isn't something the author is comfortable with going into detail, or any other number of reasons. This instead gets the point across in a comedic way and doesn't change the tone by getting directly explicit with the content.

Personally I enjoyed this short story, I found it to be cute and funny. Lastly I don't think graphic sex is a necessary detail in a story such as this.

last edited at Feb 27, 2018 12:13AM

Best Mangaka Rohan
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joined Dec 13, 2016

That was sweet

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joined Apr 2, 2017

don't tell us they had sex show it

It's been while since I've posted on the forums so I'm not certain if we're allowed to post links but here's the wiki page on Danbooru for "They had lots of sex afterwards":
https://danbooru.donmai.us/wiki_pages/51624

It's a humorous way of concluding a story and confirming that they had sex. It's in my opinion a perfectly fine thing to use when writing. Maybe sex isn't something the author is comfortable with going into detail, or any other number of reasons. This instead gets the point across in a comedic way and doesn't change the tone by getting directly explicit with the content.

Personally I enjoyed this short story, I found it to be cute and funny. Lastly I don't think graphic sex is a necessary detail in a story such as this.

OMG
i TOTALLY agree with you xD
such a well constructed opinion

Crying%20trash
joined Feb 8, 2018

Okay, this was cute, but why is it called "Jealousy Sure is Nice?"

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joined Aug 1, 2011

Okay, this was cute, but why is it called "Jealousy Sure is Nice?"

The girlfriend was jealous that she got a call from a boy in her class, so she interrupted. They had a nice time afterwards.

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joined Jul 11, 2017

I wish of more Gavienc. It is my dream

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joined Oct 6, 2014

Damn this was the highlight of my day! So good.

DR2 Hajime Hinata
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joined Jul 20, 2016

Cool I like the art, I wonder how the guy is gonna act around her the next time he sees her

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joined Jan 31, 2013

Wish we couldve seen the sex ....still funny cute

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joined Jul 20, 2011

It's been while since I've posted on the forums so I'm not certain if we're allowed to post links but here's the wiki page on Danbooru for "They had lots of sex afterwards":
https://danbooru.donmai.us/wiki_pages/51624

It's a humorous way of concluding a story and confirming that they had sex. It's in my opinion a perfectly fine thing to use when writing. Maybe sex isn't something the author is comfortable with going into detail, or any other number of reasons. This instead gets the point across in a comedic way and doesn't change the tone by getting directly explicit with the content.

Crying%20trash
joined Feb 8, 2018

Okay, this was cute, but why is it called "Jealousy Sure is Nice?"

The girlfriend was jealous that she got a call from a boy in her class, so she interrupted. They had a nice time afterwards.

Oh, I feel dumb now.

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joined Feb 1, 2018

Short but sweet!

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joined Oct 18, 2017

hahaha...damn... that was cute, actually. :)

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joined Dec 21, 2015

Cute!

St1
joined Feb 17, 2013

sweet :) I also quite like a 'then they had sex' ending - not that I mind seeing it lol - but especially with comedy it is gonna change the tone so I see why they dont.

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joined Sep 4, 2017

cutee

Marion Diabolito
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joined Jan 5, 2015

I always use "and then they went to Kaguya Inn for a meet-and-greet with Mira and Ooshima Tomo."

Chibi2
joined Jul 23, 2015

This is so cuteee aaa~

Suminsmile
joined Nov 17, 2016

this piece sure is nice

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joined May 14, 2017

I almost read bazinga with bazingan...
:v

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joined Feb 27, 2020

B A Z I N G A

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