don't tell us they had sex show it
It's been while since I've posted on the forums so I'm not certain if we're allowed to post links but here's the wiki page on Danbooru for "They had lots of sex afterwards":
https://danbooru.donmai.us/wiki_pages/51624
It's a humorous way of concluding a story and confirming that they had sex. It's in my opinion a perfectly fine thing to use when writing. Maybe sex isn't something the author is comfortable with going into detail, or any other number of reasons. This instead gets the point across in a comedic way and doesn't change the tone by getting directly explicit with the content.
Personally I enjoyed this short story, I found it to be cute and funny. Lastly I don't think graphic sex is a necessary detail in a story such as this.
last edited at Feb 27, 2018 12:13AM