I'm skeptical of the plan. The megane-chan would be aroused by the badly written novel, not by the thought of the other girl reading it. That was a bit of a stretch.
I really love Ohsawa Yayoi's cool characters, how they seemingly are ice queens, stoic, unfeeling girls but in fact they could be and go hot, for the ones the like/love.
This one resonates with Metronome and Etude, which I thoroughly like