I really like this. The art style has a lot of character and people actually look their age and there isn't any stupid blantant fanservice.
It's starting slow, but that's realistic anyway. I can tell the characters apart more and more as I get used to it (big cast that it started out with is tough for anything).
Not enough set up for the characters before new ones are introduced. :(
Makes it sound like we're reading A Kiss and a White Lily lol.
This is not how you present your story, you don't start with a conflict and jump to another conflict that leads nowhere based in confusion and then shift the focus to a new character
In Chapter 1 I felt a little confused, but then Chapter 2 came out and I'm fine now. You guys might want to wait until there's some more chapters out and.... "leads nowhere"? Not sure where you're getting nowhere from? I thought stuff was linking together fine. The dark haired girl's ex-friend person? They're probably just another delinquent/SI couple to be worked on in the future, or at least I assumed that.
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