Well, they certainly looked cute getting sweaty. Felt to me like lost potential, somehow--for how few panels there were before things got hot and heavy, it did such a good job of making me feel like there were actual characters and lovey feelings there that it seems a pity that it couldn't have been stretched a bit, turned into a love story with sex as punctuation rather than sex (and probably in future chapters, orgies) with a love story as window dressing.

Pacing was weird. Seemed like one second she was masturbating in her room, then the next she was suddenly in the infirmary having sex with that girl.

Confused me too. Seems like it was trying to get cute having the masturbation scene be to the memory, but the transition didn't work well. Luckily the art was so sexy I don't think most of us cared that much.

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Asami did outright say that Touko was bragging about her boyfriend again, so this is, at best, cheating or, at worst... well, you know.

You read wrong, she's talking about another friend.
With this author, next chapter we learn that Touko is sleeping with a bunch of other girls. The fact that she knows the > nurse won't be back make me think she's accustomed to it.

Oh shoot, she's talking about a "Ayumin," not Touko. Whoops, disregard what I said then! I have more hope that this will end in a yuri fashion then.

Edit: I certainly wouldn't be surprised by that development... it's basically the same thing as Nadeshiko Hiyori except only one girl is sleeping with a bunch of other girls and not both of them... which is really not the same thing at all now that I think about it.

Nadeshiko was more a story about Polymary, so it will be interesting to see what direction this one takes.

Maruta's girls really sweat a lot.

Must always be summer in his manga.

Nevertheless, art is nice.

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in the last manga there was the reverse between the girl from the city and the girls from the bullocks, this time is the tomboysh sporty sempai and the sweet and cute kouai,
well, i'm not looking for a plot here, but i like the art, even if i don't find it very sensual, i don't know why
i still prefer Mira

ah, i'm not the only one confused from the pacing, i understood it wasn't a dream because there wasn't the "whishfull thinking" tag (i often find tags a little oppressing, but they are usefull)

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I read Mira and Maruta for completely different reasons (well, both are fap material, but I find myself reading Mira sometimes with no intentions to fap). I like Maruta's art style, and on the whole, I like how there's more of a main character thinking about what's happening and how it makes the smut like a fantasy-becoming-reality.
With Mira, the character interactions, relationships, and situations are more central her stories, sometimes killing the pacing with the amount of character that's given (looking at you, Corruption's Finale). The art is hit-or-miss, with some of it pretty well done (by Mira's standards), and some of it not so much. Then again, art style can trump quality, which is something I think Mira's managed to pull off most of the time. I've seen some very well drawn hentai, though (Yuzuki N Dash, Inomaru, and Sena Youtarou, notably).
I like both, but Mira wins for yuri hands down because she's just done more of it, and it's often pure yuri goodness. But personally, Corruption's Finale and Nadeshiko Hiyori are about tied with me.
Jesus, I just realized I'm seriously comparing fap/schlick material, art quality, plot and characters. Kill me now.

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Them saying I love you is kinda bullshit. There wasn't any romance at all. Don't hate it though, at least it was consensual

toes interwining

Censor that shit! I haven't seen anything this lewd in my life...

After Nadeshiko Hiyori I got some expectations. Hoping for the best.

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Oh this style is nice, I look forward to see more

I read Mira and Maruta for completely different reasons (well, both are fap material, but I find myself reading Mira sometimes with no intentions to fap). I like Maruta's art style, and on the whole, I like how there's more of a main character thinking about what's happening and how it makes the smut like a fantasy-becoming-reality.
With Mira, the character interactions, relationships, and situations are more central her stories, sometimes killing the pacing with the amount of character that's given (looking at you, Corruption's Finale). The art is hit-or-miss, with some of it pretty well done (by Mira's standards), and some of it not so much. Then again, art style can trump quality, which is something I think Mira's managed to pull off most of the time. I've seen some very well drawn hentai, though (Yuzuki N Dash, Inomaru, and Sena Youtarou, notably).
I like both, but Mira wins for yuri hands down because she's just done more of it, and it's often pure yuri goodness. But personally, Corruption's Finale and Nadeshiko Hiyori are about tied with me.
Jesus, I just realized I'm seriously comparing fap/schlick material, art quality, plot and characters. Kill me now.

i only want to say that in Mira's works there's more plot than porn, i too read those for the story, but Corruption is one of my favorities, the grow of the main is somenthing you don't usually find in short stories.
i compared mira and maruta because they do manga longer than normal one-shot with sex and plot in them,
..and now you can kill me too

Okay.

Pacing was weird. Seemed like one second she was masturbating in her room, then the next she was suddenly in the infirmary having sex with that girl.

Yea, that bugged me too. Still, a nicely drawn bit of hentai....

Come on people, Maruta is normally a avarage hentai artist
that mean mostly work will be het, but some will be pure yuri.
Is not like she dislike yuri or anything

I was convinced that the sex was just her masturbation fantasy until the last page. What the fuck author, that's not how you pace a story.

That sensei is fucking awesome.
Shes like: Imma step out and let them fuck. I have studied how long girls take to orgasm. So, I'll come back once they're done.

Lmao Nice art. Loved it.

toes interwining

Censor that shit! I haven't seen anything this lewd in my life...

Same! I didn't think there was anything dirtier than hand-holding, but looks like I was wrong. I'm glad other people share my outrage at such perversion.

toes interwining

Censor that shit! I haven't seen anything this lewd in my life...

Same! I didn't think there was anything dirtier than hand-holding, but looks like I was wrong. I'm glad other people share my outrage at such perversion.

Y'all are like little babies.

Go watch some hardcore eyes-meeting-across-the-room and get back to me. If you can.

Relevant-ish:

Edit: Also, thumbs up for yuri end

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"That's called sixty-nine!" Made me laugh. Also, did anyone else notice at the end how Touko never denied the perfume thing?

That sensei is fucking awesome.
Shes like: Imma step out and let them fuck. I have studied how long girls take to orgasm. So, I'll come back once they're done.

The infirmary nurses always know when to politely step out of the room for some vague reason or other. It's part of their job.

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And the story itself was decent. Like some people said, the pacing felt a bit off-kilter, but overall it did a pretty good job of combining sweetness with the NSFW.

What game is that image from? It looks like a good one (though, alas, it's probably not implying yuri nurse bed stuff since I think I know every vaguely yuri game out there and I have no idea what this) since I'm a sucker for sorta meta jokes like this.

Also, I can't imagine how very weird applying perfume to your crotch would feel...

What game is that image from? It looks like a good one (though, alas, it's probably not implying yuri nurse bed stuff since I think I know every vaguely yuri game out there and I have no idea what this) since I'm a sucker for sorta meta jokes like this.

Also, I can't imagine how very weird applying perfume to your crotch would feel...

Game is Fate/ Extra; and yeah, no, it's definitely yuri. The one who says the line above is the girl with brown hair in the background. If you want to learn more, you can ask in the video game discussion thread since I don't want to go off-topic.

I don't get it. Is Maruta notorious for turning yuri stories into het?

Bisexuals exist, yo.

I don't get it. Is Maruta notorious for turning yuri stories into het?

Bisexuals exist, yo.

Haha, yeah. In their defense though, maybe they're talking about the relationship in the story and the ending more than anything else. (something like yuri relationship for most of it then having a het relationship in the end)

I don't get it. Is Maruta notorious for turning yuri stories into het?

Bisexuals exist, yo.

Haha, yeah. In their defense though, maybe they're talking about the relationship in the story and the ending more than anything else. (something like yuri relationship for most of it then having a het relationship in the end)

I haven't read any of Maruta's het works (and I don't plan to either!), but, based on the comments in that other full yuri work, I think this is pretty much what happens in all of Maruta's stuff. Everyone was surprised that Nadeshiko Hiyori turned out to be full yuri (especially with that weird Papa thing... glad that got taken care of without any problems), and I guess I was too because of all the bad things I heard...

Also, Fate/Extra, huh? I still need to get around to reading the Fate VNs one day... although I don't believe they were ever officially released in America? And, well, even if they were, I certainly wouldn't have the money to pay for it based on how much stuff like Grisaia and Nurse Love Addiction are! (and, yeah, sorry for talking about this here, I don't want to derail the thread either).

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