Nightmare's Paradise? I can't find it on this site.

^ yuri-ism pls do

umm... interesting... I guess...
Mostly amused in the protagonist's dynamics, although a rather bland portrayal. Was kinda disappointing.

This artist's shows some improvements in character positions in relation to backgrounds in some pages, but also still jank on others.

last edited at Oct 31, 2016 3:00AM

Slightly confusing without knowing the previous book.

Confused

The characters aren't really my mug of hot cocoa.

Meh, I have read worse. Though I am confused without the first book.

It was kinda interesting, made me wonder if it's like a commentary, like who we are day to day vs who we are under the sheets :P
It was interesting enough that I'd read the prequel...

But if the queen loves the servant then why does she cheat on her with the succubus in the dream world? And who was that short haired girl that appeared in her place?

^Read author's note and afterword.

Even with the first book the dialogue is utterly confusing.
Page 13 and 14 made me go (ehhh?).

last edited at Oct 31, 2016 7:54AM

Kind of confusing but I'm a sucker for fantasy yuri... and it was hot :P

Can someone spoil me the whole plot until now lol?

It felt like Sekihara was going for subtle nuances to their relationship, but didn't add enough actual content about the relationship for them to matter. It's all hints that rely on...not much of anything, really.

I imagine if I'd been able to read the first story I might at least care who either of them were, but at is it there's not enough "there" there.

I was interested because servant looked like Koakuma but story was a bit weak. And she had a lot of sex for a day.

I'm very confused. It all feels so disjointed

My guess is that the short-haired girl in the dream is a human-like "clone" of the younger Queen that got somehow left behind during her earlier forays into the dream world. Suc-chan, a resident of the dream world, met and fell in love with Anne, but due to unexplained history, hates her progenitor, the Queen. Even though Anne now exists as a separate persistent entity in the dream world, the Queen seems to still be able to re-enter her consciousness whenever she falls asleep (or passes out) in the demon world, and sometimes even take over her body completely for a time.

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Nezchan posted:

It felt like Sekihara was going for subtle nuances to their relationship, but didn't add enough actual content about the relationship for them to matter. It's all hints that rely on...not much of anything, really.

I imagine if I'd been able to read the first story I might at least care who either of them were, but at is it there's not enough "there" there.

Agreed. It feels like subtext because the context doesn't have a lot of information. First book probably fills in a lot. Though, near the end they did talk about things like consciousness-sharing and stuff.

Boy, that was confusing. Wasn't sure who I was rooting for.

The phrase "topping from the bottom" also came to mind throughout.

What just happened?.......

Dialogue feels disjointed and nonsensical.

Quite sour.

last edited at Oct 31, 2016 2:42PM

Sekihara always has nice sex scenes, but definitely there was a lack of context to this whole story. Hopefully we get to see the first part to this, and it'll clear up any questions and backstory.

I don't get it