Okay...I like it...but,
Took me awhile to figure out they're in China. Or am I still lost?
With what I am assuming is Chinese (and if it isn't fuck this sentence) I hate how the names are so unfamilar and have so many different forms that while I am reading the names blend in like they're talking about a place, or a beverage...or something.
If all that is petty (pretty sure it is if I studied any basic Chinese...I mean the same can be said for the basics of any language) then my last complaint is the only valid one. I mean it's probably me, but...it's still ya know, me. The series is tagged [Read left to right] but sometimes it seems like it's [Read down to up] and then it also becomes [Read right to left] at other times and sometimes it's a combination of two of those ways or a mixture of all three. Maybe I could get some direction here. It's not a bad thing, it just throws off the flow for me.