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230px-ray_the_animation
joined Feb 2, 2013

it was different i admit... first time I seen asagi ryuu draws a girl with small sagging breasts. normally they all have big tits up to their chin and a big ass. So it was better in that sense but still, the anal was a turn off

it's true that the girls are more normal than usual, and there're comedy aspects unusual for asagi ryuu, that is always elegant and poetic in every situation, like extreme-watersport, rape or abuse...

and the fact that the blonde tried anal because she was sad she couldn't come together, makes the story sweet and romantic for me,

i don't know why this reaction with anal, i can only talk about het world, but it's a lot common; i never asked for anal to the girls i dated, because i'm the romantic type probably, and i'm content with normal sex, but quite all the girls i came out, someday asked me to try it,
i didn't looked down on them at all (differently from other people i know),
it happened they asked me to try it attive,..and passive too, but is TMI...

joined Jan 11, 2013

my favorite two words of the day will be pitiful breast lol

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joined May 24, 2013

The art is disgusting in this new chapter it doesn't make the sex attractive

Kuro_bear
joined Apr 1, 2013

Oh man, that's unsanitary :<

Witch
joined Feb 24, 2013

a pure maiden appears! now sensei you have to take responsibility, oh you~~

Aikatsu%2050%20aoi%20ichigo%20hug%20test
joined Apr 18, 2013

Are pages out of order in chapter 6? To me it seems the the conversation doesn't seem to flow correctly between the first two pages. The second page she starts by talking in a way like she was asked a question, but there was none asked in the first.

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joined Apr 10, 2013

The sensei kinda reminded me of Meiling from Touhou.... Because of them Chinese dress...

Well, it's good to see some virgin once in a while... Students in creation of Asagi always seemed to have experiences so this is new.

last edited at Oct 14, 2013 8:08PM

OrangePekoe Admin
Animesher.com_tamako-market-midori-tokiwa-deviantart-950416a
joined Mar 20, 2013

Why do I feel that there's a page missing between ch6 p119&p120?

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Are pages out of order in chapter 6? To me it seems the the conversation doesn't seem to flow correctly between the first two pages. The second page she starts by talking in a way like she was asked a question, but there was none asked in the first.

I'm ~99% sure there is no issue here. If you read page 120 left-right, bottom-top, it flows pretty normally.

last edited at Oct 14, 2013 9:05PM

E8xkjfiweawhwl5
joined Sep 23, 2013

The blonde has the same name as my sister, not funny. seeking solace with the teacher.

Midori-facepalm
Yuri Project
joined Dec 12, 2012

Why do I feel that there's a page missing between ch6 p119&p120?

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Are pages out of order in chapter 6? To me it seems the the conversation doesn't seem to flow correctly between the first two pages. The second page she starts by talking in a way like she was asked a question, but there was none asked in the first.

I'm ~99% sure there is no issue here. If you read page 120 left-right, bottom-top, it flows pretty normally.

She is in her dorm room on the first page and talking to herself - there is no conversation that would flow between the pages. The nurse's question on the second page is implied.

OrangePekoe Admin
Animesher.com_tamako-market-midori-tokiwa-deviantart-950416a
joined Mar 20, 2013

Yeah, that probably makes a lot more sense than reading a single page backwards.

Thank you kindly for the clarification - and everything else - Phyis.

last edited at Oct 15, 2013 4:02PM

Art11a
joined Feb 3, 2013

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/heavenly_garden_where_the_maidens_bloom_ch06#19

bottom panel, they squirt all over the car -___-'', is it not gonna stink alot? and i'm curious how will the sensei clean it up? anyway, from the way the sensei lick blondie there, i still can't imagine that she's a pure virgin

%e5%b0%8f%e8%88%94
joined May 22, 2013

Why do I feel that there's a page missing between ch6 p119&p120?

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Are pages out of order in chapter 6? To me it seems the the conversation doesn't seem to flow correctly between the first two pages. The second page she starts by talking in a way like she was asked a question, but there was none asked in the first.

I'm ~99% sure there is no issue here. If you read page 120 left-right, bottom-top, it flows pretty normally.

Screw that. Since when there're other read-flows apart from conventional LTR/RTL. Maybe the next Windows version should support Vertical Orientation besides the Orientation for east-Asian languages. (<- If you've done some programming, you'll know what I mean.)

OrangePekoe Admin
Animesher.com_tamako-market-midori-tokiwa-deviantart-950416a
joined Mar 20, 2013

As I think I already noted, it was a dumb thing to say. We can leave it at that.

%e5%b0%8f%e8%88%94
joined May 22, 2013

As I think I already noted, it was a dumb thing to say. We can leave it at that.

Just some nonsense complaints from a bored programmer, you know.

joined Sep 23, 2013

Has this ended? As in, has the chapters been posted? In the latest chapter, they do say "End".

Z%20ss
joined Oct 15, 2013

Gotta say... Ch7 was impressive O_o

I274kwh
joined Sep 14, 2013

Im just passing by to say that this manga is too much for my young yuri mind. No hate or anything.

That aside. I really wish that there's a solid plot here. I keep seeing mindless sex.

Wheels150
Payapaya Scans
joined Jan 28, 2013

Asagi Ryu must have a thing for plays.

Phyis Moderator
Midori-facepalm
Yuri Project
joined Dec 12, 2012

That aside. I really wish that there's a solid plot here. I keep seeing mindless sex.

Then you're not paying attention.

Dark_Tzitzimine
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joined Dec 18, 2013

Haven't read all the discussion but can I ask why people says than there's no plot? This chapter was a pretty nice coda to Miharu and Itsuki's romance, in fact the sex took a backseat to allow a clear showing of their feelings. Pretty good chapter.

While Asagi Ryu's can be cut from the same mold the fact than he bothers to depict genuine love between his characters (no matter how nonsensical could be) is a plus for him, has he done a non hentai manga? I'm really curious to see how he tacks a romance story withouth the clutch of sex.

last edited at Jan 25, 2014 2:36AM

230px-ray_the_animation
joined Feb 2, 2013

and when i expected only porn w/o plot, now there's a Hoffmann citation, although coppelius is the villain of one of the acts, not the automaton-girl

Ghostface-scream-decal__33749.1511159183
joined Feb 1, 2013

I just love how Asagi just doesn't put the same sex position like how some other Yuri's sort of do it. Like it's not all fingering or boob licking, but they're positions that aren't normally seen in yuri(most likely seen in het) , which is freaking amazing!!! Like when Miharu dominates itsuki, the positions are just so... Wow! <don't mind the pervert here. Anyways.... I hope to see more amazing stories from Asagi in the future! :D

Z%20ss
joined Oct 15, 2013

I keep noticing the art (when not in sex-mode) is so good, perspectives and backgrounds, character's positions, etc.

Fine read.

Another_random_anime_girl_render__by_bakachasity-d5qdads
joined Feb 8, 2011

I noticed that the Maiden of Tenjou is the first one to appear in the first chapter and then shows up out-of-nowhere at the end. Who is this mysterious character? D:

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