idk how people cant see how Jiujin did that on porpouse so that the kids can be under the princess, like that poison bottle just came out at the right time XD.

Suddenly, Jiujin getting sandwormed has moved from the "crime against humanity" portion of my book to the "morally justified precaution" chapter.

This isn't a feel good moment where the protagonist gains an adoring slave that worships the ground they walk, nor is it a moment of complete dehumanization. Though brutal and gorey, the chapter ends with the enslaved woman taking things into her own hands and gaining agency in the story. She knows they can't be trusted so she drinks the poison to gain negotiating power. It's a move made from desperation, but it's a really great bit of characterization for someone who I had expected to be a background/one off character at best.

It is quite a power move to (begin to) liberate oneself with an act of ultimate submission.

idk how people cant see how Jiujin did that on porpouse so that the kids can be under the princess, like that poison bottle just came out at the right time XD.

An interesting theory. She did, however, murder a defenseless enslaved man earlier on -- was that part of the deception, too?

Alright here we go. I really like this development. Jiujin is a bandit by trade and will happily do anything to ensure her survival be that slaughtering defensless people who simply saw too much or as said above happening to drop the parasite flask right in front of them so they'll be forced to shift into trustworthy allies instead.

Meanwhile Lanze and yes that is her name it's never been used outside of the extra chapter that goes into their character design. Lanze is certainly willing to take advantage of those around her but sets a clear line between that and slaughter of innocents.

She wants to live not become the slavetrading bandits who destroyed her original tribe.

Oh, you know what, blondie? You can whistle as much as you want. Actually I think you should create a 7 minutes long symphony consisting only of whistling.

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Analogically, Lanse is Danaerys Targaryen, and Juijin is Jorah Mormont. In this essay I will

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This is an interesting development but now the art is throwing me off. Like this is not the art style I would expect for this type of murder and torture and coughing up blood.