I haven't read all of this, but from what I read in the comments and the two pages I saw, this doujin is a poorly executed porn mag aimed at the same kind of people who like the Michael Bay Transformers movies. Excuse my language As soon as I saw Akane's toe being sucked on by Not-Akari I stopped reading. Why can't there be some cute KyouAya and cute and fluffy Akane x Akari. I know I'm one of like three people who like that pairing, but can I please get some vanilla, cute, pure Akane x Akari? Please, Godoka? No? Oh. Alright. I'll go back to shipping Yuzuki and Momoka, the card shop lady, in my corner.