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joined Jul 17, 2013

aaaah i love this kinda stories <3

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joined Apr 11, 2011

This is one of my all-time favorites. I absolutely love the amazonesque delinquent/tiny nerd combo on display here. But with all due appreciation to Wings of Yuri, frankly, this particular translation is...extremely rough...I'd love to see this one redone at some point.

Underoneroof
joined Jan 17, 2014

they were cute. the story was cute.

Dynasty%20necromancer
joined Mar 6, 2014

Baka

Dark_Tzitzimine
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joined Dec 18, 2013

Baka

That's kind of jarring. Nothing too major but yeah, weird.

candy76041820
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joined May 22, 2013

Are the two of your winning points made up of muscle? XD


And why am I feeling about some pages being missing?

last edited at May 1, 2014 2:26AM

Makiko
joined May 1, 2014

Ahhh... This made my night... :3

last edited at Oct 22, 2014 7:43AM

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joined Jun 28, 2012

Baka

That's kind of jarring. Nothing too major but yeah, weird.

It was already established as a word she uses, flinging it at the bully girls. But with Hayase at the end, she clearly says it with affection. If it's jarring, then you weren't paying attention to the earlier usage.

Motoko.edited.1
joined May 2, 2014

i like it ^_^

Nuku_nuku_13
joined Aug 27, 2013

Why isn't there more from this mangaka? This was outstanding. ;/

Marion Diabolito
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joined Jan 5, 2015

"Baka" is a slang expression meaning "I am a manga or anime tsundere". I think it's Kyoani dialect.

joined Feb 24, 2019

I think what's "jarring" about the use of baka here has less to do with why it is used in universe and more to do with why it is left untranslated in the text. I doubt I'm in the minority when it comes to wanting stories to read in a believable manner. Reading a story in English with a sudden Japanese word like baka mixed in reads fairly unnaturally to me and comes off as somewhat jarring.

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