Cute, but way too short. Oh well, at least it was enjoyable enough.

As always, we all need more of this

i dont get it

Guess she gets lost on purpose just to meet that youngest spirit(again?) huh.

??? what?

i dont get it

The blonde girls are spirits. Spirits prey on humans. The main character helps the human back home instead of eating her because she has a crush on her. It's not super-clear, but I think that's accurate

i dont get it

The blonde girls are spirits. Spirits prey on humans. The main character helps the human back home instead of eating her because she has a crush on her. It's not super-clear, but I think that's accurate

It took a couple of reads, but I've got it now.

Basically it's what you say, but she helps the human by concealing her within herself somehow, and telling the other spirits there's a human but in the other direction so they're sent on a wild, uh, human chase. The bit on page 3 is her releasing the human back into the visible world, before sending her back on her way.

i dont get it

The blonde girls are spirits. Spirits prey on humans. The main character helps the human back home instead of eating her because she has a crush on her. It's not super-clear, but I think that's accurate

It took a couple of reads, but I've got it now.

Basically it's what you say, but she helps the human by concealing her within herself somehow, and telling the other spirits there's a human but in the other direction so they're sent on a wild, uh, human chase. The bit on page 3 is her releasing the human back into the visible world, before sending her back on her way.

... Yeah. After rereading, that seems to be about right.

So the forest spirit fell in love with a human even though they normally eat human life energy? Isn't that kind of like a person falling in love with a cow?

So the forest spirit fell in love with a human even though they normally eat human life energy? Isn't that kind of like a person falling in love with a cow?

So a vampire that fell in love with its victim is also like a person falling in love with a cow?

So the forest spirit fell in love with a human even though they normally eat human life energy? Isn't that kind of like a person falling in love with a cow?

So a vampire that fell in love with its victim is also like a person falling in love with a cow?

Um yeah. That is why I dislike the vampire romance genra.

i dont get it

The blonde girls are spirits. Spirits prey on humans. The main character helps the human back home instead of eating her because she has a crush on her. It's not super-clear, but I think that's accurate

Yes. You’ve got it right YwY

Um yeah. That is why I dislike the vampire romance genra.

That's allowed. Personally I'm fond of how it can add an interesting tension and complexity to a setting, particularly if it's a broad phenomenon. (which we have no perspective to see here obvs) But that's if it's actually used thoughtfully ofc. Beastars comes to mind as an anime that really capitalizes that tension.

No numbers, hatches, or smoke monsters? This is a pretty weird Lost fan fic.

The spirits kind of sound like some sort of (lesbian) succubus on how they talk about "sucking the life energy out of a person". I guess the relationship could work if the spirit limited how much she took during each "session". That is of course assuming the "life force drain" merely causes (extreme) exhaustion of the drained human instead of permanent damage.

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No numbers, hatches, or smoke monsters? This is a pretty weird Lost fan fic.

4 8 15 16 23 42 69.......wait, what?

The human woman is very attractive