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joined Apr 22, 2018

Well this is a good read. Nice and fluffy before I go to work and suffer

last edited at Jan 28, 2020 3:00PM

Smallerpfp
joined Nov 26, 2019

Is it just me or is the translation very hard to follow at a few points, like the second page. Feels like someone needed to go back over it again and change it from a more literal translation to one that sounded right in English.

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joined Apr 18, 2016

I wish I could work from home.

I wish I had a wife.

I wish I had a wife I could work from home with.

Hino1
joined Nov 17, 2018

so cute!

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joined Apr 28, 2016

Definitely needs another editing pass.

Page 10's mood was absolutely slaughtered by the awkward language.

last edited at Jan 28, 2020 6:17PM

AnimexObsession
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joined Dec 27, 2014

CUTE i approve

Im%20gonna%20fucking%20cry%20koyuki
joined Nov 5, 2017

Very cute <33

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joined Jun 1, 2018

A very good read before i go to out and suffer.

Original
joined Jan 30, 2019

A very good read before i go to out and suffer.

mood

last edited at Jan 28, 2020 7:52PM

Image62
joined Feb 28, 2015

It is good very good very happy

Images
joined Aug 19, 2018

Man was this sweet. I hope we get more of this yuri sweetness fron this author

Hololive%2032
joined May 1, 2018

More is required.

joined Dec 18, 2018

Is it just me or is the translation very hard to follow at a few points, like the second page. Feels like someone needed to go back over it again and change it from a more literal translation to one that sounded right in English.

I felt the same that the language is a bit...rigid, it doesn't really flow.

Still cute tho, and not much story so it doesn't bother that much.

Image
joined Feb 23, 2016

Damn i love it~ i love it when i see adult tag

joined Dec 30, 2018

Page 06 what's wrong with Yuu san face?
It looks like she's smiling with her teeth out

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joined Oct 28, 2016

Page 06 what's wrong with Yuu san face?
It looks like she's smiling with her teeth out

Mayhaps a a goofy sleeping face xD Might be a mistake on the artist/author's hand too but... goofy sleeping face x3

Utenaanthy01
joined Aug 4, 2018

Happy lesbians living the happy lesbian life.
Warm and fluffy.
I want some pot-au-feu now.

Lilium
joined Aug 29, 2018

Fluff police, we are suspecting you are currently in possession of fluff surpassing the upper legal limit. Please come with us for inspection.

Futaribeya
joined Dec 8, 2018

It's so cute, definitely love the art style.
Still, the translation feels a bit weird.

20180801_183554
joined Oct 7, 2017

I personally think the bubble indicators were confusing.
As in it was difficult to determine who exactly was talking other than having to piece together context from the entire page/their roles.

Difficult to determine who was talking since it seems like one person is talking due to the bubble location but the text wouldn't match the character's background.

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joined Aug 24, 2016

Sweet~ UwU

Stretch%20full
joined Jun 13, 2012

Remind me of Yuu X Azusa.

Stretch%20full
joined Jun 13, 2012

Idiot couple. XD

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