Holy shit. I'm usually really good at catching on to plot twists like that, but goddamn. That one got me. Bravo.

I thought I knew what was gonna happen from page one but then they flipped it on me. Well played.

It was sad in a weird way awww

That was oddly sad, just sad all around really.

So Nami can also see ghosts too? Or is just pretending? Maybe Mayu can only see that one ghost? Creepy stuff.

It has a Drama tag, that's fine. Angst might work as well.

After reading all of Watari Saya's works on this site, this one was predictable
But nicely done nonetheless

last edited at Nov 16, 2019 4:29AM

Damn...

Bruh

I knew that was going to be the twist and still it made me tear up.

the ghost tag isn't needed though since it literally spoils the whole story, if the fact that she was a ghost was outright given to us in the first place, it wouldn't be a spoiler, thus needing a tag

Except the way the story is presented tricks the reader into believing that the skeptical girl is the one who is a ghost that's unaware of her state, up until the twist is finally revealed.

I think Mayu knew that Nami is a ghost and that she's preventing her in finding out the truth. I mean when Mayu asked if ghost trully exist then Nami said yes, she told her that she knew Nami wasn't a liar.

I am glad there were no tags that spoiled it for me. I had no idea what was going on, so the twist was surprising and upsetting. The Drama tag was the only thing that made me wary of reading it, cause I know how bad this tag can get. So, I guess that's one thing that can stop people feom reading this one. The only problem with minimal tags is if someone remembers some of the content of the story, but not the name, and they would have a hard time finding it going by tags. But we all already knew that, didn't we?

last edited at Oct 24, 2020 1:00AM

In pretty sure that its an imaginary friend

omg why you do this to us..

This is just twistedly sad