T___T why!! ouch, my heart hurts T___T

Ugh, depressive twist out from nowhere. I hate when they do that.

Did she ..... like ..... did she really die ? :(
Stop playing with my heart like that ! It's not fair ...

No, please... Don't make my night end like this! :'(

I find this kind of stuff interesting just because it comes from normally het/shoujo authors. I used to be moderately into shoujo before I got into yuri, and I have to say that in general my impressions of the style and content of (het) shoujo versus yuri are kind of drastically different. This is a pretty strong/enjoyable work to me from that perspective, particularly considering I had been following Taamo's shoujo work until pretty recently. It doesn't hold back on the emotion, and feels kind of more raw/authentic in its tragedy than 'bad end' works from authors who are primarily into yuri.

kasumi died? no! what the heck... she didn't even get to say goodbye sobs :'(

What the??? No!!!
Must
read
another
story...

This is just so depressing... :\

Well that was depressing.

Guess I have to rewatch Kitakuba Katsudou Kiroku.

Oh god the feels ;-;

Didn't know Taamo wrote a yuri like this!

Honey Crush in 8 pages.
yaaa....

Not well executed, no build up. Too short for what it wanted to tell.

House of the Sun also had yuri options but still it was good this was meh

This was good, until the sudden twist at the end, that wasn't needed. I did like where the story was going until it went in that direction, haha

I remember submitting the depressing as fuck tag for this one, wasn't accepted though.
As for the twist, I don't find it meaningless; it's one of those stories that remind you life is short and you can lose it at any moment, and therefore, shouldn't do things you'll regret later.
Short but effective, this oneshot was good in its way.

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Meh. No development. Didn't really feel it, ya know?

Nononononononono

Not this twist PLEASE
AAAAAAAAAAA

Well that was a nice gut stabbing

I would've loved it if the author had taken another 2 pages to properly depict the sadness she felt... for a while I was confused as to why she was crying until I realised the black dress and the tone and everything

Oh yeah, this is a good one for my addictive sad doomed yuri pile.

As someone with BPD and autism the whole "leave me alone you are annoying" hit too close to home :')