Ooh!  This is the first I've seen the version he published as a book!  It cleaned up quite nice; the shading style reminds me of Karaagetarou's work.  I was a little worried about how the long vertical strips would make the transition to standard page sizes, but I think it turned out well enough.  I admit I'm a little sad it lost the blue and green tint, but the improved clarity makes up for it.  Totally worth reading again.
I am kindof not satisfied with the ending... I want more... 
:p
You'll be pleased to know Mitsumoto's working on a sequel, then. :)  His handwriting is as atrocious as ever: https://danbooru.donmai.us/pools/7484
Compositionally, I'm a quite disappointed that he seems to have abandoned page layouts entirely.  His use of panel closure in this comic is really top-notch.
PS: You will now read everything Mokou says with Ogata Megumi's voice.  (Sailor Uranus style)
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