Pretty interesting work to say the least. Good to see Ogino is able to work on different genres with the same skill he showed up back on Gamma. And speaking of, this newfound knack of his for lesbian lolicon was somewhat foreshadowed with Marina and Yuri's pin ups he made after Gamma's ending.

I hate to not like it, the art was so good and the premise so nice. Why did it have to end that way ? :,(

I hate to not like it, the art was so good and the premise so nice. Why did it have to end that way ? :,(

I guess the author set us up to feel what's like in that younger girl shoe.

It started with "aww, they would make a nice couple" to "awww, could this be a good chance for them to get close", then "wait, this is going too fast", "shocked, why did you hit her", "things are turned out pretty bad" before finally cap with "ah fuck, just rape her, I don't care anymore"

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Always my first thought when finishing something like this: "What happens when the younger girl grows up?"

In this, Megumi doesn't even pretend to be anything other than a pedophile. And it doesn't look like she actually cares about Risa outside of her lust. So, even if they somehow found a mutually agreeable relationship despite the rape, it's not one that can last.

Oh well. Not every story has to be happy.

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'I always knew I'd end up raping you one day, right Risa?'... : V

Because no women are stupid and barbaric enough to actually enjoy, let alone produce, garbage like plotless sex-only works. If you do, you can't even be considered a woman at all. You're probably just a horny teenage boy. /s

For people who actually claim this (who I know in real life): you obviously haven't read any fanfiction. You would not imagine the amount of rape and other horrible shit that female writers come up with.

At the same time, I do think that overall female readers appreciate more story along with their smut (at least I do). That's not to disparage the existence of porn without plot - I definitely appreciated it a lot more when I was younger.

Anyways I didn't really like this.

This type of NSFW is my favorite.

Because no women are stupid and barbaric enough to actually enjoy, let alone produce, garbage like plotless sex-only works. If you do, you can't even be considered a woman at all. You're probably just a horny teenage boy. /s

For people who actually claim this (who I know in real life): you obviously haven't read any fanfiction. You would not imagine the amount of rape and other horrible shit that female writers come up with.

Whoa actually, that reminds me, isn't that what a lot of yaoi smut/porn is like? Legit plotless sex-driven works/doujins?

Whoa actually, that reminds me, isn't that what a lot of yaoi smut/porn is like? Legit plotless sex-driven works/doujins?

The term "fujoshi" exist for a reason and is not exactly a compliment (much like otaku, actually, I think it's mostly westerners that like to call themselves otaku with pride).

But yeah, the whole "no way girls could imagine and create such a thing !" is a gross misconception. Truth is, girls can have their mind in the gutter just as much as boys when it comes to something they love.

As for this doujin, well, the tags were clear enough regarding the content, mostly read it because Ogino Jun and knew it wouldn't be all fluffy feelings.

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I wish people read the tags and took the story as it is. Perhaps it was the combination of rape and age gap that triggers people? For me, in dynasty-scans, I view rape as an element to speed relationships (usually end up in a everyone is happy ending). While the ending was happy, my only concern was it felt way too rushed. Constant ecstasy of sex as a platform to solidify a relationship is just a cheap excuse. Was unique though 7/10.

Fuck shit like this

I wish people read the tags and took the story as it is. Perhaps it was the combination of rape and age gap that triggers people? For me, in dynasty-scans, I view rape as an element to speed relationships (usually end up in a everyone is happy ending). While the ending was happy, my only concern was it felt way too rushed. Constant ecstasy of sex as a platform to solidify a relationship is just a cheap excuse. Was unique though 7/10.

Are you fucking stupid or what? Wtf, rape is abuse, nothing more, nothing less. I can't understand that way of thinking. Hopefully you don't anything to someone in real life since it's okay if it's fake

Umm, okay that was something...

It had a good premise, and yuri lolicon I don't mind (het lolicon on the other hand is a big no no) but damn did things take a turn for the disturbing and fucked up. Though it did have the rape tag so I guess it's to be expected ¯_ツ_/¯

I wish people read the tags and took the story as it is. Perhaps it was the combination of rape and age gap that triggers people? For me, in dynasty-scans, I view rape as an element to speed relationships (usually end up in a everyone is happy ending). While the ending was happy, my only concern was it felt way too rushed. Constant ecstasy of sex as a platform to solidify a relationship is just a cheap excuse. Was unique though 7/10.

Are you fucking stupid or what? Wtf, rape is abuse, nothing more, nothing less. I can't understand that way of thinking. Hopefully you don't anything to someone in real life since it's okay if it's fake

Dude, no reason to go around insulting people for having a different interpretation of fictional media. This site has tags front and center for a reason.

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I wish people read the tags and took the story as it is. Perhaps it was the combination of rape and age gap that triggers people? For me, in dynasty-scans, I view rape as an element to speed relationships (usually end up in a everyone is happy ending).

Hm. The thing that is triggering many of us is that all too many people have that sort of attitude, "rape as an element to speed up relationships", outside of the dynasty-scan context as well. It is one of the premises behind a lot of date-rape, as well as the fun laws that used to state that there is no such thing as rape within a relationship / marriage. Married individuals always having to be at the beck and call of their partners when it came to sex was codified into law for a scarily long time. So no, depicting rape as a way of "speeding up a relationship" is not something that many of us think should be taken lightly. The lolicon aspect here simply compounds the issue.

Because no women are stupid and barbaric enough to actually enjoy, let alone produce, garbage like plotless sex-only works. If you do, you can't even be considered a woman at all.

I mean, I understand that women aren't usually into stuff like this, but there are some out there, and to say they shouldn't be considered a woman is pretty harsh. Yes, most women usually prefer romance, and if they do like smut, they usually like it on the side with the romance, but there are also some who like raw porn, and even extreme things like this. Personally I stopped reading once that older girl slapped the younger girl when she told her to stop.

For people who actually claim this (who I know in real life): you obviously haven't read any fanfiction. You would not imagine the amount of rape and other horrible shit that female writers come up with.

At the same time, I do think that overall female readers appreciate more story along with their smut (at least I do). That's not to disparage the existence of porn without plot - I definitely appreciated it a lot more when I was younger.

Anyways I didn't really like this.

Yeah exactly, there are tons of fanfiction writers that write crazy stuff like that. I mean 50 shades was written by a woman, and I was told it was a terrible story/movie (never read/saw it) Though a good majority of females probably don't write about yuri. I bet you'd see more crazy stuff like this in the yaoi/hetro section written by female writters than the Yuri section.

Why would you read what is essentially a hentai doujin with 24 pages and expects stellar writing and a moving love story?

I wish people read the tags and took the story as it is. Perhaps it was the combination of rape and age gap that triggers people? For me, in dynasty-scans, I view rape as an element to speed relationships (usually end up in a everyone is happy ending).

Hm. The thing that is triggering many of us is that all too many people have that sort of attitude, "rape as an element to speed up relationships", outside of the dynasty-scan context as well. It is one of the premises behind a lot of date-rape, as well as the fun laws that used to state that there is no such thing as rape within a relationship / marriage. Married individuals always having to be at the beck and call of their partners when it came to sex was codified into law for a scarily long time. So no, depicting rape as a way of "speeding up a relationship" is not something that many of us think should be taken lightly. The lolicon aspect here simply compounds the issue.

I mean everyone has their own taste, but I have to agree with Jtt. The idea of rape "speeding up a relationship" is a bit concerning. However since you meantioned "in Dynasty-scans", I assume you only have that view/idea here, or only in the fanfiction world. Well from how you worded your comment, it implies as much.

So Megumi is only interested in Risa because she's a kid. I wonder what will happen when Risa grows up. Will she go off her rocker and kill Megumi because she doesn't want her or what?

Because no women are stupid and barbaric enough to actually enjoy, let alone produce, garbage like plotless sex-only works. If you do, you can't even be considered a woman at all.

I mean, I understand that women aren't usually into stuff like this, but there are some out there, and to say they shouldn't be considered a woman is pretty harsh. Yes, most women usually prefer romance, and if they do like smut, they usually like it on the side with the romance, but there are also some who like raw porn, and even extreme things like this. Personally I stopped reading once that older girl slapped the younger girl when she told her to stop.

I'm sorry. I put an "/s" at the end indicating I was being highly sarcastic. I know sarcasm is hard to convey through text, so I tried to indicate it in an obvious way.

This is fairly decent for loli x onee-san porn.Let it pass.

At the start a thought Risa was gonna be the rapist.

why not add women don't poop also?

When even an /s tag isn't enough.

always get boner in other hentai website, but this... ugh i felt guilty

I don't know. Now you're gonna make me feel bad for having a boner out of this.
I mean the art is just too amazing.

why not add women don't poop also?

When even an /s tag isn't enough.

Now you're assuming everybody knows that /s stands for sarcasm.

Using "shortcuts" is nice and all, but completely void if you're not 100% sure that every single person reading it will understand it.