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joined Jun 12, 2015

Not bad but I've seen better stories with this setting.

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joined Jun 26, 2013

I really enjoy how this artist puts faces to the "nobodies". It's always the small things that make a big difference in a good story.

Tsw118
joined Feb 27, 2015

It's like Pretty Woman, except interesting.

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joined Mar 11, 2016

I really liked it; both the art and the story. Would like to see more of this author's works. I hate prostitution and I liked it precisely because she quited it. [and got together with her love interest]

last edited at Mar 11, 2016 11:56AM

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joined Jun 25, 2016

Loved the art tho

Best Mangaka Rohan
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joined Dec 13, 2016

A nice 'gay for pay' story?! Impossible.

The world is ending.

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joined Mar 20, 2013

The art is really lovely. I feel like the tags are a total misrepresentation though. How can something with such potential for negativity be such a nice and positive story? Why isn't this a series? Just how much content can be stuffed into a oneshot? Too many questions, my head hurts.

DR2 Hajime Hinata
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joined Jul 20, 2016

Kotoko-san needs a lesson from Handa-kun
Sorry, I'm just reading the manga rn and since I buy them irl they're like $15! I'll treasure them always though since they're funny

Nep
joined Apr 28, 2016

what is a call girl ? something like prostitution ?

Internet_lied
joined Jul 15, 2016

what is a call girl ? something like prostitution ?

Basically, a sex worker who isn't public about her services. Unlike a street prostitute, you have to call her or her agency to get an appointment first, which is why she's called that.

Nep
joined Apr 28, 2016

that's so illegal in my country...

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joined Jun 23, 2017

Best kind of boss ever for this kind of service, I guess.

The tag gay for pay makes me think of what a french porn star said during one of his gaming stream : "I don't believe it. [Other porn stars] could literally do anything else to earn money [...]".

The idea was that if you're doing gay sex, you're just gay (or bi, at the very least) making the legitimacy of the term gay for pay a bit moot.

last edited at Oct 15, 2017 7:09PM

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joined May 13, 2018

I thought this was pretty cute...
Until I saw the comments about the sequel.
You know, I found this via another yuri piece by this artist, where a girl who liked the MC blackmailed other girls into heavily bullying the MC so that the MC would never leave her house and solely depend on the girl, so I can't say that this story's true darkness is surprising.

last edited at Jun 17, 2018 12:06PM

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joined May 8, 2017

I thought this was pretty cute...
Until I saw the comments about the sequel.
You know, I found this via another yuri piece by this artist, where a girl who liked the MC blackmailed other girls into heavily bullying the MC so that the MC would never leave her house and solely depend on the girl, so I can't say that this story's true darkness is surprising.

those were fake "spoilers."
The real sequel isn't dark at all.

joined Aug 13, 2017

Love the art, hate the story. I'm so sick of child prostitution, of any prostitution, it makes me want to vomit.

cuck

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joined Jun 13, 2012

So much SM...

DR2 Hajime Hinata
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joined Jul 20, 2016

I've always liked the art and story for this one, I always reread it every now and then

I guess you could tell from my comment that was made 3 years ago lol

joined Dec 11, 2021

I'm torn. Hate the art, love the story, but it's way too rushed. I'm sure there's some sort of understanding with certain types of stories that the reader with be able to fill in the "due to certain circumstances" on their own and just go straight into the sex/foot massaging/oil lapping ... erm ... whatever that was. My preference is to see the backstory, so this sort of story that teases at potential kind of annoys me.

Maybe it's because I write romance for a living; I want to see what someone /else/ came up with once in a while. With stories like this, I'll spend the next two days writing the pre/post story in my head. That's probably 'working as intended' but I can't help feeling cheated lol

I would read more by this artist/author. Good pacing, given the brevity, enough setting to keep it from being a jump-in-bed story, still hate the art.

I shouldn't read these within three hours of my writing critique group, huh.

Edit: I also don't get the name. I expected the rich girl to be the sub for some reason. Oh well.

The art its ok, its the artist's art style. It isnt rushed, you can't wait a long detailed story in a one shot bruh. Next time read the tag kid. Or draw yours instead and show how a proper manga should be

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