Huh, surprised about this being uploaded here. Neat little story although the ending was somewhat lacking. I also would've liked a less, let's say "angular" style for the art. At times the characters look really, really manly.

Huh? That's it? I can't believe it ended like that. I didn't know where it would be going but that's kinda anti climatic.

doesn't say "completed" so i'm hoping for more! Also, really gorgeous art style and story and everything.

Is there more? As a heterosexual male I greatly enjoy watching shitty men suffer. (Implying that I'm better) (But I've been playing life solo for 20 years) (btw I'm 20) (At least my sister tells me I'm the best elder brother shes knows) (what am I doing with this comment?) (what is life?) (Its 12:45am) (I'm gonna sleep now)

It's here!!! YES!!

Well that was interesting. Never had a confused lady boner about a woman that has a manly figure...there is more to this right?

Wow I just figured out that this author is russian ( also a woman). That's brave considering how the community over there is homo phobic af

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wow! this is great

shes so buff!!!!!! good

I need more, the art and the storyline is just amazing.

Ahh what a bittersweet ending. I liked the art a lot though. I was wondering at first why the translation seemed a little off with some words but if the author is Russian and translated herself that makes sense.

Good read though even without a happy ending, I enjoyed it.

sees tags i'm in

last edited at Jul 26, 2016 1:38AM

I'm swooning pretty hard over both of them. I mean damn, how hot can a girl get!

Amaaazing art I hope there is more by this author

The dark haired girl straight up looks like a JRPG villain when she's in her club outfit.

This is... intense... like, those muscles and the art make it look so rought.

Is there more? As a heterosexual male I greatly enjoy watching shitty men suffer. (Implying that I'm better) (But I've been playing life solo for 20 years) (btw I'm 20) (At least my sister tells me I'm the best elder brother shes knows) (what am I doing with this comment?) (what is life?) (Its 12:45am) (I'm gonna sleep now)

Ahhh mi brother... I feel you. I don't have a cute imouto though, just a meany onee-san.

Was so excited about the tags and realized I've already read it on the author's Deviant art
Damn it T.T

That muscular woman with fangs reminds me of Korra a little!... Oh what's with the censorship? ¬_¬

aaaa muscles. I love the art style. very nice

yaaay, finally a continuation of the story.

i found this a long time ago and thought this was never be finished.

End?

Wow this was really good! I would have also liked if it was longer and a happier ending, still very great.

last edited at Jul 26, 2016 4:14AM

Huh, surprised about this being uploaded here. Neat little story although the ending was somewhat lacking. I also would've liked a less, let's say "angular" style for the art. At times the characters look really, really manly.

I wouldn't say "angular". That, to me, implies bony bodies. Maybe "chunky"? My biggest issue is with the light-hair girl (Malena?), especially her jaws. Let the tomboy be tomboy though. I usually prefer... see my avatar, but this one wasn't too butch for me, imo.

The dark haired girl straight up looks like a JRPG villain when she's in her club outfit.

She looked like some kind of "sexy Dragon Ball character" to me.

Huh, surprised about this being uploaded here. Neat little story although the ending was somewhat lacking. I also would've liked a less, let's say "angular" style for the art. At times the characters look really, really manly.

It's a little understandable with the setting and all...as opposed to ahem whatever the heck happened to Shitsurakuen in the long run.