Jealous Umi might be one of the best things I never thought I'd enjoy so much...

Okay, I think I actually get the ending now but... It's more than a little sudden and it doesn't elaborate at all on anything. I kind of like open endings but this is way too open.

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Kotori is pretty sly. I like the vibe of this story and the two perspectives we get.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/you_are_my_crystalline_flower#25

And the thing Umi grabs onto is Kotori's skirt? :3

e: I really should buy those KotoUmi training outfit nendoroids.

last edited at May 10, 2016 3:28PM

Kotori is such a devil >.>
LOVE IT

Kotori is a little bit...strange her ^^

I mean look at her http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/you_are_my_crystalline_flower#22
Or http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/you_are_my_crystalline_flower#19 this

Well maybe I read too much of this Yandere Kotori comics ^^
Btw I love her smile http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/you_are_my_crystalline_flower#24 ^^

Sly Kotori and Jealous Umi...why not? :3
But I wanna see their reactions after the kiss and Kotori's smile >.<

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Yeah, they finally kissed!
Jelous umi is best umi

I think this is the best KotoUmi doujin I've read. Sly Kotori is indeed the best.
What exactly is page 15 supposed to be? Stars? It seems more like a missing page, with no discernible segue between pages 14 & 16. I guess it might indicate a perspective shift, which does happen, but it's an odd way to do it if so.

Sly Kotori and jealous Umi are wonderful things.

The best.

Gaton

a kiss

i can die now

KotoUmi is MY LIFE FOR REALZ! >~<

Hail Kotoumi!

Finally! A decent KotoUmi doujin with a kiss!

For a second I was worried we were heading for a bad end there :c
Still sweet :D

I'm a bit curious though, why is KotoUmi always depicted with a red anemone flower? Is it something from the anime?

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I have to be honest, my favourite part of this wasn't the kiss, as nice as that was. It was Umi watching Kotori's eyes as she watched the video. There was a palpable feeling of Umi's attraction to her that a lot of authors miss. I wish there were more stories that communicated attraction so well.

For a second I was worried we were heading for a bad end there :c
Still sweet :D

I'm a bit curious though, why is KotoUmi always depicted with a red anemone flower? Is it something from the anime?

Because they have a duet named Anemone Heart
It is really cute <3

For a second I was worried we were heading for a bad end there :c
Still sweet :D

I'm a bit curious though, why is KotoUmi always depicted with a red anemone flower? Is it something from the anime?

Because they have a duet named Anemone Heart
It is really cute <3

Ooh, that makes sense :D

i love this KotoUmi doujin.

You made me remember the saddest part of that manga.

This needs a sequel

We finally got our kiss. I really love Gaton's works.

awww this is so cute

I NEEED MOAAAAAR!!! My heart might not be able to take it but I still want more!!! XD

Stunning from the cover to the end

Bless this. So nice.

when it ends and your heart is not ready bcz it wants more than that ending ;-; BUT I STILL LoVE IT OMG GATON iS ALREADY ON MY FAVE KOTOUMI ARTISTS LIST

PLS TRANSLATE MORE OF GATON-sensei'S WORKS PLS ILY SCANLATORS AND TRANSLATORS