there are spelling mistakes. "all i know it that" shouldnt it be "is that"?

I love it ! Ratana Satis always do a great job.

I love this one. Good job, Ratana.

Nice and hot ' '

heh
What a tease...

It was only a dream? Naf.. ;D

Her dreams wil come true. Good for her.

What a treat :D

there are spelling mistakes. "all i know it that" shouldnt it be "is that"?

To be honest the Musqueerteers' translations have been pretty janky for a while. I'll give them credit for their not-completely-unreadable work, but it needs improvement.

This manga though is pretty impressive. It's suave, cool, and a little bit sexy. The atmosphere setup makes it. I quickly got the urge to throw up sexy dance club music myself to fit. I settled on "Fly Away" and "Theme of Scanty and Kneesocks" from the soundtrack of Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt. The more masculine girl caught my eye ever since I first saw her on Thiaguinho-sama's avatar. Though they're both really nice.

Heh, that twist at the end. "It was just a dream. But I'm not just going to let my dreams be dreams."

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Page 11 made me chuckle a bit, because the panel placement kind of makes it seems as if Mel's hand is huge. Great oneshot at any rate, will probably read again!

I settled on "Fly Away" and "Theme of Scanty and Kneesocks" from the soundtrack of Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt.

Perfect.

That cover page!

Niceeee!!!

To be honest the Musqueerteer's translations have been pretty janky for a while. I'll give them credit for their not-completely-unreadable work, but it needs improvement.

And here we go again...

I love when people basically write "translation sucks" and don't tell us why exactly or where. Spelling mistakes can happen sometimes (corrected that one on p03 btw) but I don't think it's as horrible mistake as giving you a sentence without any sense or with wrong sense compared to original work.

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Is it just me or did anyone else just get turned on . <3

So when can we expect this level of lewdness from lily love? I want it now...

Glorious! Although I was sad it was just a fantasy, but then happy again at the end.

I think it's not easy to translate my native language into another language.

so.. su su na 55 :) this one is great!!. I'll waiting for "Magnet" too. XD

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took ten years to read it all cus i kept stopping at pages to admire the art.
GOOD STUFF.

What? A dream?! Oh my i didn't knew xD But i reaaallyy loved it! Ratana is love! Ratana is life! You're my wife!! x3

I'm guessing when she mentioned things not turning out how you expect them in the end she got dommed pretty hard

To be honest the Musqueerteers' translations have been pretty janky for a while. I'll give them credit for their not-completely-unreadable work, but it needs improvement.

And here we go again...

I love when people basically write "translation sucks" and don't tell us why exactly or where. Spelling mistakes can happen sometimes (corrected that one on p03 btw) but I don't think it's as horrible mistake as giving you a sentence without any sense or with wrong sense compared to original work.

Ok, geez, no need for the sarcastic snark. I looked over the manga again, and I'll point out specific errors in the future.

I'm guessing when she mentioned things not turning out how you expect them in the end she got dommed pretty hard

Haha, I didn't think of that possibility, but that's what's makes the open ending so great.

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To be honest the Musqueerteer's translations have been pretty janky for a while. I'll give them credit for their not-completely-unreadable work, but it needs improvement.

And here we go again...

I love when people basically write "translation sucks" and don't tell us why exactly or where. Spelling mistakes can happen sometimes (corrected that one on p03 btw) but I don't think it's as horrible mistake as giving you a sentence without any sense or with wrong sense compared to original work.

Ok, geez, no need for the sarcastic snark. I looked over the manga again, and I'll point out specific errors in the future.

To be honest you kind of started the snarky comments lol

Everyone makes mistakes, especially when you're me and it's your signature move to fuck up something every release ;-;, it'll really help if you can point out the problems in your initial post. I mean for me it's always nice to have people point these mistakes out precisely so it's easier for me to go straight to the problem to fix them.

also I think this story is so hot I may or may not have made a yaranaika face while reading this at work. ヽ(；▽；)ノ

i really love this one thank for your hard works.

Is it just me or did anyone else just get turned on . <3

Oh.. Totally XD