I rather like that ending, and actually have no real need for a continuation. It feels rather real-life-y. I mean, judging from personal observation, the percentage of people who never work up the courage to confess is somewhat higher than those who do. So, rather than letting her feelings loose, Nico just kinda gently petted them, and in the end decided to keep her distance. And I am okay with that. (Although a small part of me is not okay that I am okay with that, but overall...)
I wouldn't mind it being a bittersweet ending, except that's pretty much the first time the story really indicates that Nico has genuine feelings instead of just being a good friend and helping her understand what her friend is going through. If we'd gotten more clues that's what was going on I would have accepted this a bit better..
I actually had a hunch that Nico's feelings were sincerely romantic in nature, from page 15, chapter 1. Mind you, it was just a hunch, and I pretty much forgot about it by the time 3rd chapter came out, so I agree that it was somewhat last-minute reveal. But, I rather felt like I was a spectator here, rather than a reader, and by that I mean that I was not privy to character's innermost thoughts and feelings, like one usually is when reading romance fiction, but rather, that I observed the characters as though I was physically present in the scene, and since I have no mind-reading powers... At least, that is the way I experienced this work.
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