Nevrilicious Scans
joined Jun 5, 2015
I actually liked it. I thought it worked perfectly as 2 chapters oneshot. And honestly. Comparing to some oneshots endings, this one was pretty good and told us enough to make some conclusions.
I personally think Shiina felt like crying because she realize that her life will change forever and she is not prepared for it. She is weak-willed and fallen for Kuroneko probably because she is exact opposite of her. Shiina was drawn by her frank personality hence first kiss (she said she herself didn't know why she kissed her). Still she hoped her relationship with Kuroneko somehow will remain hidden so she won't have to deal with her friends, since she knows she won't be able to. But then Kuroneko crushed any hope of that. At first Shiina does what she thought about doing from the beginning "it's not worth losing my place for someone like Kuroneko" (1 chapter) and she started avoiding her. But because she still had feelings for Kuronoeko and couldn't endure watching her suffer (even worse if Kuroneko herself doesn't think about it as suffering, making Shiina feel even more guilty, worrying for both of them), she helps her and decided to continue what she started (aka have sex). Shiina might still think that she will be able to hid it somehow, make it one time thing or something, but then Kuroneko confesses her feelings and it all crumbles. Shiina should be feeling happy, their feelings are mutual, but she is just overwhelmed by the truth, that with Kuroneko, the entire life she knew and managed to adapt to ends here. She is just unable to feel joy at the moment, because she is painfully aware of what will come next.
I think the reason why there is no more chapters is because from now one it would be just the same drama over and over again. Shiina can't deal with social pressure and Kuroneko have to support her. I think author realized that it wouldn't be interesting and just finished before things would get stall.
Razov
Could have been better if there was a last page where she acceptes kuroneko and says something like: "Together we will be happy". I just like a happy end in this cold cold world.
It wouldn't work, because it isn't happy ending per se. I'd say it is more realistic end, where Shiina is aware that even if they both love each other, it is far from end of troubles for her. If anything the true path full of obstacles starts now and she is honestly so not confident she is prepare for it, that she wants to cry. Hard to call it happy ending.
last edited at Aug 19, 2015 5:32PM