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Yuu
joined Mar 28, 2015

So it ends like this. Cool ending, but pretty forgettable all in all.

I was turned on a little.

ChocolateCakeLover
Gigi7
joined Feb 4, 2015

Bdsm setting wasn't bad idea, but it was way too tame (kinda like 50 shades movie, most hardcore thing was whipping hard, oh noes!). I guess girls from prestigious schools aren't stressed that much ;P

not hardcore enough?
here http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/hop_skip_crazy

Koneko, why? ;-; I'd forgotten that was a thing...

but why did Ran cut her hair.. I really hate it when long haired girls cut their hair short..

Agreed. Though I don't think this one was too bad.

Ending was okay. Rest of the story was better.

Miss Darth Moe though. Imperial March halted half way through.

On the other hand John K. Peta is too hardcore xD And I don't really like so unrealistic porn ;P

Too hardcore doesn't begin to describe it.

last edited at Jul 17, 2015 5:12PM

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Rosmontis
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joined Jun 5, 2015

ChocolateCakeLover

but why did Ran cut her hair.. I really hate it when long haired girls cut their hair short..

Agreed. Though I don't think this one was too bad.

It depends, but I prefer long hair too, so when they cut them after time skip, I'm usually disappointed. I like when the reverse happen though.

On the other hand John K. Peta is too hardcore xD And I don't really like so unrealistic porn ;P

Too hardcore doesn't begin to describe it.

Ridiculously fucked up?

ChocolateCakeLover
Gigi7
joined Feb 4, 2015

It depends, but I prefer long hair too, so when they cut them after time skip, I'm usually disappointed. I like when the reverse happen though.

The reverse I usually like, unless I've really come to like their hair. There is a flat out 'This is too short for me to like' point though, so I'm pretty opinionated about hair lengths over all.

Ridiculously fucked up?

Honestly not sure we have the words.

Yuu
joined Mar 28, 2015

John K. Peta stuff is not hardcore. It's so unrealistic and stupid that it's funny.

ChocolateCakeLover
Gigi7
joined Feb 4, 2015

Usually, I would agree something that outlandish was funny.

JKP scarred me though. Right in the brain. The only part of the body not touched in his manga, that I've seen. I think?

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Rosmontis
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joined Jun 5, 2015

Usually, I would agree something that outlandish was funny.

JKP scarred me though. Right in the brain. The only part of the body not touched in his manga, that I've seen. I think?

I'm pretty sure there is one where girl saves alien or something and it messed with her brain making her ultra aroused + having esp power in return. Here is your nightmare fuel. You're welcome xD

Yuu
joined Mar 28, 2015

At least, there's no blood.

ChocolateCakeLover
Gigi7
joined Feb 4, 2015

I'm pretty sure there is one where girl saves alien or something and it messed with her brain making her ultra aroused + having esp power in return. Here is your nightmare fuel. You're welcome xD

I was gonna sleep tonight... ;-;

At least, there's no blood.

Small mercy's.

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Rosmontis
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joined Jun 5, 2015

I'm pretty sure there is one where girl saves alien or something and it messed with her brain making her ultra aroused + having esp power in return. Here is your nightmare fuel. You're welcome xD

I was gonna sleep tonight... ;-;

I'll snuggle with you if that helps ;P (only if you're a girl though)

ChocolateCakeLover
Gigi7
joined Feb 4, 2015

No dice I'm afraid. Thanks for the sentiment though. ;-;

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Rosmontis
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joined Jun 5, 2015

No dice I'm afraid. Thanks for the sentiment though. ;-;

pat pat I'll support you mentally then. sending positive thoughts

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joined Jun 6, 2014

I'll be honest, I never thought I'd say the sentence "Wow that story was surprisingly good" for something pretty much meant to be smut until I found Mira.

I mean not spectacular by any means, but at least hard to call it bad unless your definition of 'bad' is 'it wasn't good'. I kinda liked it, all things considered.

ChocolateCakeLover
Gigi7
joined Feb 4, 2015

pat pat I'll support you mentally then. sending positive thoughts

Your positive thoughts warm me through the night.

God damn it, I derailed again. I thought I was getting better. ;-;

Prprcharlotte_8
joined Apr 1, 2013

I'm disappointed that Moe got what she wanted in the end xD she just went mad, hurt people, had her way with everyone just to get Ran and she succeed x)
But i do like how she look when she's older :3

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joined Jan 2, 2014

so ends another one of mira's works I feel like it was ok but I feel stuff is best when its vanillia

last edited at Jul 17, 2015 6:45PM

Image
joined Jul 28, 2014

Finally puts her fucking pigtails down, like she'd still sleep and shower with them on like who does that.

meh, forgive me this is mostly because i am a romantic but i really don't like long-standing orgies like this, you wanna have one night stands? fine, not for me but that's ok, but i dont like orgies on the basis of OTP or OT3 (in very rare cases) is probably much more love filled and satisfying in the long run.

sex is fine and all but it only lasts a short time and when you get to the point where you are doing it with a shitton of people you dont care about it loses all meaning, so yeah basically because my views on sex tend to be that they should have more love in them i dont really like this much.

oh... I'm a total hopeless romantic and love romanticism, but I think that last chapter was great. Sure, it's smut. However, I could see the desperation coming true for Moe and feel the passion though the ultra-sex and BDSM. Sorry if that sounded too enthusiastic, I didn't mean it to be, but I think it turned out rather romantic in the end.

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joined Jul 12, 2012

Now that's a happy end right there! :) And Moe looks really good as an adult ôwô

FlameHazeKatsu
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joined Feb 5, 2013

I don't even know why I kept reading this, well wanted to see it through, 's like one of those things where you start something and even tho its just a "meh" you have to finish it. And heck, this is one of those. But man, what a thing. Glad it's over :p lol

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joined Feb 3, 2013

I'm disappointed that Moe got what she wanted in the end xD she just went mad, hurt people, had her way with everyone just to get Ran and she succeed x)
But i do like how she look when she's older :3

Moe didn't actually hurt anyone, even in dark mode. In fact, she kind of improved the relationship of some of them. She probably looked more evil than she actually was because she was unhappy for half of the series. She could barely whistand the emptiness she felt due to Ran not loving her back.

joined Jul 8, 2013

sigh Really...just so much disappointment. In the series. In the mangaka. Just disappointment everywhere lol. Frankly, this is the first release of Mira's that I've ever read that, not only did i not love, but I just straight up disliked it. It's one thing to go out of your element, cuz all mangaka do that, but this was just poorly done all around. And I really feel that most of us would agree.

last edited at Jul 17, 2015 11:04PM

Dark_Tzitzimine
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joined Dec 18, 2013

Awesome ending.

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joined Feb 22, 2015

sigh Really...just so much disappointment. In the series. In the mangaka. Just disappointment everywhere lol. Frankly, this is the first release of Mira's that I've ever read that, not only did i not love, but I just straight up disliked it. It's one thing to go out of your element, cuz all mangaka do that, but this was just poorly done all around. And I really feel that most of us would agree.

Speak for yourself you miserable bugger. I actually rather liked this. I didn't think I would at the start but it grew on me. Probably because I expected Moe to be sad and useless the whole way through, but instead she went to the dark side, became awesome, won the day and got the girl. I also don't have anything against group sex (not for me personally though) so that aspect didn't impede my enjoyment. What I really enjoyed in the final chapter was during Moe and Ran's love make both their masks fell completely. Ran was no longer a perfect sempai, Moe was no longer a dominatrix, they were just them selves, and I think the honesty of it all was great.

last edited at Jul 18, 2015 12:38AM

Bunnythor_full_small
joined May 17, 2015

I had trouble getting into the story of the last chapter. Not because of the writing or story, but because the spectacular anatomy failure on page 0076. First, Ran is lying on her back, so there should be no reason why she should have her boobs touching each other at all. Second, her areolae and nipples don't look like they are actually part of the surface of her bosom. They look more like nipple stickers haphazardly pasted on, appearing to point in strange directions that should be impossible given their location. And last, the placement of her left nipple is waaay too far to the side, especially given the placement of her right nipple.

This is especially strange, considering the artist can draw this character's bosom properly (for example, on the bottom of page 0090).

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