Plot sucks imo its just jumping places with no real progression. Like One obstacle right after the other there is no flow. Lacks reason so its not that interesting its just the angst, frustration, and especially the art that brings people in. But overall it lacks plot. So to say the writing is shit. Dont fight me for my opinions hoe
In the first chapter when moe is talking with rio at the tennis court. Shes asks moe about the dorms and that her mother told her to not enter the dorms. i wonder if her mom told her about the dorms and how her mom knew. what if her mom is the "senpai" of ryouko san or something idk im guessing.
The short girl is left out too much like shes just there. What if chihiro and nao end up falling for each other, thatd be funny but disapointing. But anyway chihiro needs to shut up cuz shes at fault for using a method like that, waiting for aoi to have a downfall and then take advantage and comfort her.. Its like kuzushiros one-shot, Your Fault, except not as dramatic.
