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NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

WE NEED MORE COMMENTS

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joined Oct 1, 2014

SHIT IM LITERALLY CRYING OMFG WEISS NO

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joined Apr 7, 2017

My god...NOT THE CLIFFHANGERS

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joined Apr 22, 2015

My heart is dying right now TT__TT

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joined Sep 25, 2017

GOD NO PLS WEISS

joined Sep 7, 2017

WEISS!!! DON'T DIE!!!!

joined Mar 26, 2014

What the fuck!!?! Dude, I'm Freakin out. Howcouldtheydothistous?!?! (How could they do this to us the way I said it was really fast and so ya know.) Omg, you can't just be gone or untranslated for like ever and then to this shit. Okay?! You just can't. Wtf

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joined Mar 7, 2017

ugh man this story updates so unbearably slow the cliffhangers are the worst

joined Mar 25, 2013

Page 20 is the same as page 15 only untranslated.

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joined Jan 23, 2016

Whatthefuck.

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joined Oct 28, 2016

W-w-weisss...

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joined Jan 15, 2015

What the heck, don't tell me that the one who possessed Weiss was Roman!

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joined Nov 14, 2015

Roman, DON'T TOUCH OUR LESBIAN!!!!

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joined Aug 28, 2016

So... uh... what the fuck just happened?

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joined Jun 30, 2017

Weirdo

OOOHH GOOODDDZZ NOOOOOOOO!!!! TT^TT
....maybe it was kind of good something took over Weiss body, so it will be kind of ok after everything again...??

LET'S GET THIS DUSTY BODY FREE FROM DUST AGAIN!!!!

joined May 22, 2013

Then... dust crystals are made of grimm corpses? Then Weiss' body is full of dead grimm (aka faunus)? That's dark

joined Jun 13, 2017

It seems to be another entity entirely that possessed Weiss' body. Poor Ruby had to go through her mother's death and now this...

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joined Aug 28, 2016

So, with Kuma's permission, I redid the typesetting Henceforward Past Chapter 1. It's not quite ready, as I'm not 100% satisfied with the reworked dialogue, but I'm posting it here for feedback.
https://imgur.com/a/RalHj

last edited at Nov 3, 2017 12:22PM

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@kah0922 I checked it out and it was pretty great! The dialogue and text are much clearer than the original. My only suggestion though is that some of the text could be revised to preserve some of the literary element present in the original. I hope this helps! I'm willing to lend a hand if you need it

last edited at Dec 15, 2017 9:21PM

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joined Jul 14, 2013

Well I can tell you guys one thing..... and that one thing is that my freakin jaw dropped LIKE WTF?!
I want Weiss back :(

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@kah0922 I checked it out and it was pretty great! The dialogue and text are much clearer than the original. My only suggestion though is that some of the text could be revised to preserve some of the literary element present in the original. I hope this helps! I'm willing to lend a hand if you need it

Sure, just tell me the lines you think should be changed.

Edit 1: There's a typo on page 1 of my version - "wihtout".

last edited at Dec 20, 2017 8:06PM

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joined May 19, 2016

HF AU is canon for me now

joined Feb 7, 2018

Monty. Friggin' MONTY!?

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joined Mar 9, 2013

no! Weiss! T_T why?!

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