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madoHoMURA discussion 15 Nov 03:49
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That was a thing I just read.

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I still regret nothing.

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A yuri doujin already... how long has bowsette been a thing now?

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Putting this out there. This isn't my best work.

And this'll be my last Mai-Hime release for a while. I'll be focusing on other projects in the meantime.

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Magnet discussion 15 Feb 00:46
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I forgot my credit page but fuck it, it's not really necessary.

Also, Hi. I'm back.

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Yep, that's exactly what I expected of a doujin of Pop Team Epic.

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@kah0922 I checked it out and it was pretty great! The dialogue and text are much clearer than the original. My only suggestion though is that some of the text could be revised to preserve some of the literary element present in the original. I hope this helps! I'm willing to lend a hand if you need it

Sure, just tell me the lines you think should be changed.

Edit 1: There's a typo on page 1 of my version - "wihtout".

last edited at Dec 20, 2017 8:06PM

kah0922
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So, with Kuma's permission, I redid the typesetting Henceforward Past Chapter 1. It's not quite ready, as I'm not 100% satisfied with the reworked dialogue, but I'm posting it here for feedback.
https://imgur.com/a/RalHj

last edited at Nov 3, 2017 12:22PM

kah0922
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So... uh... what the fuck just happened?

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This looks like it came from 2009

That's because it did.

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Double Bed discussion 10 Oct 17:22
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Now with 100% less JPEG artifacts.
https://e-hentai.org/g/1127151/be86d0a1de/

Also, this is another Mai-Otome doujin.

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I think there is a minor error in pg 03, "sister shizru" (shizru or shizuru?)

Fixed

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BTW, despite what people will tell you on E-Hentai, this is a Mai-Otome doujin, not a Mai-Hime doujin.

The easy way to tell is with Natsuki's last name. In Mai-Hime, it's Kuga. In Otome, it's Kruger.

kah0922
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Two things:
1. This is a My-Otome doujin.
2. IchigoYuri was the translator, not Wings of Yuri.

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Fixed, along with a couple other typos on Page 1.

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Coming at some point in the future.
https://i.imgur.com/Uw6D1d1.png

Edit: It's done - https://e-hentai.org/g/1124785/bcf7b930fa/

last edited at Oct 5, 2017 6:24PM

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Thanks a lot for the cleaned re-up! It looks so much better now.

You mean vs 10.5? They're two different versions as explained here.

last edited at Sep 1, 2017 6:19PM

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There's an updated version with a fixed typo on page 6.
Edit: Also, I thought An Emtional Being was Volume 11, not 10.5. At least, that's what IchigoYuri's site, who had the raws, said.

Volume 11 is EX, this is XX, according to IchigoYuri's site.

"Note: Kanjou Seibutsu XX [Copy/Sketches] and EX has the same content but the later was outlined, inked and has a coloured cover. It also contains Mai Otome V3 and the One-Shot special. Check out the Mai Otome section."

Yeah, that makes sense.
Page 6 still needs to be updated though.
Edit: it's updated now.

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There's an updated version with a fixed typo on page 6.
Edit: Also, I thought An Emtional Being was Volume 11, not 10.5. At least, that's what IchigoYuri's site, who had the raws, said.

last edited at Aug 31, 2017 12:18PM

kah0922
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love it, turning my head sideways was a bit awkward, but that was great.

Vertical text just wasn't working out and the text boxes were way too thin, so that was the best solution I could come up with.

last edited at Aug 27, 2017 12:52AM

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Nice, some minor errors.

pg 12, "lonliness" should be "loneliness"
pg 16, "fellings as before" should be "feelings"

...and fixed.

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Version 2.0... https://e-hentai.org/g/1106224/cc39955a2c/
This was a giant pain to work on.

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Freezing discussion 23 Aug 12:06
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pg 07, "yoy really do" should be "you"

I'll fix that when I redo this with the raws (which turned out to be gif files that were not jpeg'd.)

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Freezing discussion 20 Aug 21:52
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Welp, found the raws and it looks like Wings of Yuri somehow altered the colors a bit on a couple of the pages. Also my font colors are off on several pages.

So that's gonna have to be fixed at some point.

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Lucky Point discussion 19 Aug 14:32
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Funny story about Gatzh-Sonika, It was originally translated as Gazath-Sonika, which made it a slight pain to look up, since unless you knew about Madlax, you wouldn't be able to get the joke. It wasn't until I found a German review of Madlax using the Gazath-Sonika spelling that I made the connection.

last edited at Aug 19, 2017 2:33PM