NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

WE NEED MORE COMMENTS

SHIT IM LITERALLY CRYING OMFG WEISS NO

My god...NOT THE CLIFFHANGERS

My heart is dying right now TT__TT

GOD NO PLS WEISS

WEISS!!! DON'T DIE!!!!

What the fuck!!?! Dude, I'm Freakin out. Howcouldtheydothistous?!?! (How could they do this to us the way I said it was really fast and so ya know.) Omg, you can't just be gone or untranslated for like ever and then to this shit. Okay?! You just can't. Wtf

ugh man this story updates so unbearably slow the cliffhangers are the worst

Page 20 is the same as page 15 only untranslated.

Whatthefuck.

W-w-weisss...

What the heck, don't tell me that the one who possessed Weiss was Roman!

Roman, DON'T TOUCH OUR LESBIAN!!!!

So... uh... what the fuck just happened?

Weirdo

OOOHH GOOODDDZZ NOOOOOOOO!!!! TT^TT
....maybe it was kind of good something took over Weiss body, so it will be kind of ok after everything again...??

LET'S GET THIS DUSTY BODY FREE FROM DUST AGAIN!!!!

Then... dust crystals are made of grimm corpses? Then Weiss' body is full of dead grimm (aka faunus)? That's dark

It seems to be another entity entirely that possessed Weiss' body. Poor Ruby had to go through her mother's death and now this...

So, with Kuma's permission, I redid the typesetting Henceforward Past Chapter 1. It's not quite ready, as I'm not 100% satisfied with the reworked dialogue, but I'm posting it here for feedback.
https://imgur.com/a/RalHj

last edited at Nov 3, 2017 12:22PM

@kah0922 I checked it out and it was pretty great! The dialogue and text are much clearer than the original. My only suggestion though is that some of the text could be revised to preserve some of the literary element present in the original. I hope this helps! I'm willing to lend a hand if you need it

last edited at Dec 15, 2017 9:21PM

Well I can tell you guys one thing..... and that one thing is that my freakin jaw dropped LIKE WTF?!
I want Weiss back :(

@kah0922 I checked it out and it was pretty great! The dialogue and text are much clearer than the original. My only suggestion though is that some of the text could be revised to preserve some of the literary element present in the original. I hope this helps! I'm willing to lend a hand if you need it

Sure, just tell me the lines you think should be changed.

Edit 1: There's a typo on page 1 of my version - "wihtout".

last edited at Dec 20, 2017 8:06PM

HF AU is canon for me now

Monty. Friggin' MONTY!?

no! Weiss! T_T why?!