This is Mako AS KUROKI SEES HER. Making this more of a meta-comic. This is "Gachi Lez" Mako. And Yoshida's picture is how Kuroki WISHED Yoshida acted, because being snuggled to the breasts she's been craving for years wouild be a thrill, however embarrassing. Kuroki has no opinion on Minami one way or another, so her image of her is pretty objective - she is as she is. And while she likes Yuri, she knows her so well that she doesn't fantasize about her beimg differrent.

White Rose: Gotcha. I hope once it is finished it gets e-tankobon-ed. Thanks for your hard work. I can mentally just think of it as "The Waflove Yuri Doujin" in the meantime.

Minami is right, if mean. Apparently, Tomoko is the Chinatsu of this AU. And Emi is right, too, I mean, it's stupid calling Tomoko "gross," isn't it?

Only if you're really into English would you conflate Yō/Yoo/You to the Yuu/Yu- sound of the English version of Anata/Kimi, I think. Not that it wouldn't be gotten, but it wouldn't be a common pun. I am a huge fan of Chika x You because I see You as really sacrificing a lot for Chika's dreams, including a lot of her own.

it is her thumb, it does look weird bc it’s shaded bad, but the thumb goes up along the curve hina’s head instead of around the back like the fingers

"Now Bocchi, when we talk again you have to have ____ed every girl in your class."
"Don't worry, Kai, Aru and I will show her the ropes."
"Not the ropes! You'll scare her off!"

Poor Yuu! Little did she suspect a Toukokaiju would rise up out of the depths and devour her!

Admittedly, she did just sit there in the pool for an hour.

Man, Rumia could be like Alice's little sister. :3

She'd only be able to do it if Palutena were a massive power bottom, which she is.

Also there's just something about Palutena being a glamorous power bottom and Lucina being the constantly flustered tomboy that really works.

I love the little bow in her hair.

^ Good assessment. Well done!

There's nothing disrespectful about calling several-hundred-year-old demons and vampires who look like children "legal lolis." There are no real life women like that, so that doesn't fly.

^I was specifically talking about Shuten. Who, again, is literally based on a real life woman. You might see Shuten as looking like a child, but I don't. Different people interpret drawings differently. And besides, you'd be surprised what kind of variety of people there are in this world. There are plenty of adults who get regularly mistaken for children in real life. And, like, there is a limit to that, yes, but while I think the majority of Shuten's fanart goes well past that limit and is clearly drawing her as a child, I don't think her official art does.
And I know petite anime fans who are VERY bitter about every petite adult character getting labelled a "legal loli". Not that "legal loli" is a trope that doesn't exist, because it does, if I hadn't already made that clear, but it just gets misapplied a lot. There are people who see "petite" and think that's enough to call the character a legal loli, and they're annoyingly common.

Lol! @comments

Beautiful!

Its annoying thet people keep saying for maki to go back to nico, not everyone ships maki with nico you know

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theyre both dogs eitherway

^ And now she has a harem of loli Orchis.

^^ These are Just my opinion... It would be neat to have multiple ratings to more accurately gauge which submission is the best in each batch.

@Juanelric: I was wondering how long it would take for other readers to notice... Is it interesting or annoying for such ratings?

^I mean, if that's what the author wants to do, I'm all for it.

^It's kinda weird tbh

Btw, I looked it up (for drawing reference), but Sayo is 161 cm tall while Hina is 156 cm.

^ what you said would make sense if all forms of media, besides the game, for FGO all didn't name the protagonist Ritsuka Fujimaru.

^What a coincidence, I was thinking the same thing...