that was garbage

A worst version of Otaku Kimo

This reads like a rush job completed over a weekend. The concept isn't bad, but it is very... disjointed. It feels like there are missing pages.

typo on page 12, panel 2, "she's hasn't"

Also if she thought she wasn't interesting why was she toying with her? Why did she write a one-shot about her? Nobody in this story feels like a human being.

Huh. This was weird. Ah well.

???

Yes disappointed it was not yuri but I like this idea of the mc becoming the editor at the end, both because it allows her to stay close to her passion and because it allows me to think about their future as a potential ship. I prefer when the author gives me the yuri but it won't stop me from picturing it if it is not present.

Could have been done better...It obvious left most of the readers a unsatisfactory taste/reading experience.
The yuri level was pretty weak, a 1 out of 10 on the yuri scale (Mainly due to the kiss).

Also newbie author does obviously have a tiny a little bit interest in the MC (Former part-timer and former manga author) considering she use her image in her comic.
Complete bull about claiming MC is not interesting or Amusing...Glasses girl likely only accept the guy (Co-worker's confession to pisses her off too...Glasses girl was not serious about him and only using him to create a scenario or to AGRO the MC...). Glasses could have made her main character(protagonist) have any face but choose to pick MC's face and hairstyle instead of changing the hairstyle at least...Either meaning minor interest in MC's face or Glasses is not that creative.

Yes MC thought her co-worker was a hottie but her feelings for him was not serious...more like a weak crush at most. Even writing out imagery manga scenario of MC (Fake MC in her manga being jealous of male co-work dating another person). The scenario made MC angry though since the manga character version got her dreams and smooth sailing unlike her current life where her next manga is not working out.

MC finally got the chance to see Glasses manga artist making a confused flustered face instead of her usual calm poker tho, MC smiling and saying she hopes to work with her to make a 'Interesting manga'.

This one-shot could have been better but it could have been worse...Meh average tier level in my opinion...Won't really excite people, shock or making any lasting impact to 'most' people.

last edited at Dec 25, 2024 10:54PM

This whole thing felt like a brain storm for several ideas because god damn did it not make any sense as a one shot story , or even a Yuri (neither liked each other, and neither liked the forced kiss at all)

Feels like we skipped like 70% of the story developement and just saw the results of its, otherwise it dosen't make much sense.

Interesting.