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Kat%202
joined Mar 6, 2012

Ouch..

Screenshot_2017-06-30-15-13-16
joined Sep 11, 2016

double rejection

noicee

This
joined Jan 17, 2017

Airhead

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joined Jul 22, 2015

Fluffy yuri. Yay <3

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joined Jul 3, 2015

wrekt gg

Breakdanceanomicon
joined Jun 13, 2015

It doesn't get more generic and disappointing than this, folks!

Untitled
joined Dec 16, 2014

Girl being pals?

Marion Diabolito
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joined Jan 5, 2015

wrekt gg

Okay your avatar sells that comment.

Like, "Nico and Maki DO NOT APPROVE THAT RESPONSE."

My daydream is Nico and Maki know ibuki, Ibuki told them her story, and Nico is yelling, "she said WHAT????"

last edited at Dec 13, 2017 8:01PM

Mostly%20sunny
joined Oct 26, 2016

God help these useless lesbians.

joined Jan 8, 2014

Lol @ comments XD

joined Apr 30, 2014

Ouch, harsh.

Shamimomo%20hug
joined Jan 23, 2016

Ouch..

Oh good. I wasn't the only one that thought that.

Rsz_1465926231839
joined Jun 24, 2015

Meh. I understand creating an original story is not always easy but this, this has been so overdone. I can't help but frown and even get slightly irritated when i read these clichéd scenarios

Gt00pn-odpc
joined Sep 30, 2017

"Cross the rainbow bridge together"? Damn. She is taking the gay to a whole New level

Image
joined Aug 10, 2016

this looks like its from an anthology, maybe the author fixes it later.

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joined Apr 28, 2016

this looks like its from an anthology, maybe the author fixes it later.

As specified in both the foreword and index pages, the collection is four stories all featuring their own characters.

So this pair probably won't be revisited in this book.

last edited at Dec 14, 2017 1:52AM

Cv7t70_vyaagwe3
joined Nov 19, 2017

At first I got my hopes up. At the end I just want to scream.

Healing-punchiiiii
joined Jan 21, 2016

I've fixed the story in my mind right after so all good.

Nozomi
joined May 11, 2017

motherfucker

Your_hair_has_gotten_longer_by_folksneedheroes-d5l5v69
joined Apr 23, 2015

Not bad. Could have been an interesting start to a story.

Marion Diabolito
Dynsaty%20scans%20avatar%20from%20twgokhs
joined Jan 5, 2015

Immature girl is immature, but the worry is, immature girl grows up straight. Mature girl should gird her loins now and resolve not to moon after immature girl forever.

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joined May 24, 2015

All this is missing is Airhead-chan rolling around on her bed thinking "OMG, my heart was pounding so much! It would've been awesome if she actually meant it!"

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