Ouch..

double rejection

noicee

Airhead

Fluffy yuri. Yay <3

wrekt gg

It doesn't get more generic and disappointing than this, folks!

Girl being pals?

wrekt gg

Okay your avatar sells that comment.

Like, "Nico and Maki DO NOT APPROVE THAT RESPONSE."

My daydream is Nico and Maki know ibuki, Ibuki told them her story, and Nico is yelling, "she said WHAT????"

last edited at Dec 13, 2017 8:01PM

God help these useless lesbians.

Lol @ comments XD

Ouch, harsh.

Ouch..

Oh good. I wasn't the only one that thought that.

Meh. I understand creating an original story is not always easy but this, this has been so overdone. I can't help but frown and even get slightly irritated when i read these clichéd scenarios

"Cross the rainbow bridge together"? Damn. She is taking the gay to a whole New level

this looks like its from an anthology, maybe the author fixes it later.

this looks like its from an anthology, maybe the author fixes it later.

As specified in both the foreword and index pages, the collection is four stories all featuring their own characters.

So this pair probably won't be revisited in this book.

last edited at Dec 14, 2017 1:52AM

At first I got my hopes up. At the end I just want to scream.

I've fixed the story in my mind right after so all good.

motherfucker

Not bad. Could have been an interesting start to a story.

Immature girl is immature, but the worry is, immature girl grows up straight. Mature girl should gird her loins now and resolve not to moon after immature girl forever.

All this is missing is Airhead-chan rolling around on her bed thinking "OMG, my heart was pounding so much! It would've been awesome if she actually meant it!"