And suddenly, ugly crying.

God I'm so in love with this story.

This brought tears to my eye ....

Def. deserve a favorite spot.

This is so great, but the backup stories kind of get in the way. Nowhere near the same quality as the main story.

Yah, i skipped the backstory so i really don't know what was goin' on there. About the main story, i'm kinda confused, soo: Shangai and Hourai got their consciousness 'cuz of that Grimoire book or 'cause Alice loves them so much? And also, why did Shangai cry at the end of story when she said "This time i'll be your older sister"? The only reason that gets on my mind is "happiness" but i'm not really sure. This story is really sad, kinda like dramatic platonic love isn't it? Worth a fav.

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I believe they got consciousness because of Alice, but the Grimoire took advantage of that in the case of Hourai, the first to awaken. At the end, everyone thinks it was entirely the Grimoire's doing since the dolls went quiet, but learning that Shanghai is still alive and Hourai II is in the process of awakening is the big tell that it was really Alice all along.

I think Shanghai's tears are part happiness/relief that her sister isn't gone after all, and part sadness at the memory of what happened to her elder sister that led to the current moment.

LOL! That backstory is kind of time consuming but enjoyed it nevertheless... Those four really enjoyed their time together... And man! That's some tearjerker... Alice was kinda scary too... Yuuka is somehow nice which is... kinda nice. Man, can't get enough of this art style...

i absolutely love this version of patchouly (and alice too)

Well that can ruin someone's day ;(

Still loved the story, I love sad story's.

Also I like how it mostly sticks to Cannon besides Marisa not knowing much, she can remember anything that she comprehends. The main thing that a lot of people don't get though is that Patchouli actually really hates Marisa and even Alice but still works with them for her own interest, like how it stuck with that.

Even threatened to kill them on quite a few occations, like with rat poison.

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Argh, my old layout teacher would have failed me if I tried to pass in page 8. Is that a building for dwarves?

Wow, that was quite something.

You must be psychic... I just reread this yesterday!

Now, then, when will we get shanghai x hourai?

Such feels. I cannot hold them!!

A fantastic story, really.

I absolutely love this story so far.

And the PC98 Final Bosses keep getting better and better.

@43 and onward... PC-98 dream world? So this is where Mima's been ?!

Lol.

This is surprisingly good..

It's been years since I first read this, still as amazing as always.

And also the way Morino Hon makes action scenes is just goals. I aspire to make scenes this dynamic

Dang it! Bad end! Yet, the story is just simply sooo good!
This guy is really got some skill, eh.

I always come back to read this. I'm not a Touhou fan so I read it as a stand alone.

story is too good, have to read it a dozen times again

Can't.. stop... crying.

This is one of those things you find yourself reading every year, year after year.

I'm still rereading this at 2024. One of the best Touhou doujin that actually have an end.