Are the pages out of order or is the story just terribly confusing
"Terribly confusing" is an understatement. I love the art style, and the story and characters have an excellent premise, especially for something NSFW. But the writing is sloppy to the point of illegibility.
There could be any number of reasons why it's this bad, but it may get better later.
This is weird and kind of uncomfortable, but I think I like it. Interested in where it goes. Looks like it might be setting up for a 'customer of the day' type of story.
I know we all understand that manga is going to just be kind of awful about shit sometimes and mishandle stuff that parallels real-life traumatic shit with zero sensitivity whatsoever (especially sex assault), but idk, i think it’s too much to say that rape victims climax and really enjoy it deep down or some shit. Like I’ve never been raped thank god but I’m pretty sure it don’t work that way. And if it’s just the rapist running his mouth and spouting his delusions (that victims enjoy it) then I wish the author was more explicit that that was the case.
I really don't understand. I mean, I do understand the premise but there's nothing there. It's all telling not showing and it's so bizarre that I feel like something is missing
Page 1 to page 2 and I was thinking how could that kid grow up and look so different lmao. Only halfway into the story did I realize that it wasn't the same person. This is some wacky shit both in terms of plot and execution (seriously, I'm getting whiplash from the jumping back and forth), and I have so much respect for the TLs for even attempting this project.
If you had trouble figuring out what was going on then you should try actually reading it is incredibly obvious.
"Try actually reading it".
Yeah...good luck with that. The writing was often largely all over the place.
Okay do me a solid then. Give an idea where to look. outside of the shopkeep saying something that implied the demonkind girl was getting a hard-on, I saw nothing stating overtly that she was futa.
If you had trouble figuring out what was going on then you should try actually reading it is incredibly obvious.
"Try actually reading it".
Yeah...good luck with that. The writing was often largely all over the place.
Okay do me a solid then. Give an idea where to look. outside of the shopkeep saying something that implied the demonkind girl was getting a hard-on, I saw nothing stating overtly that she was futa.
I'm pretty sure that's a dong on page 15 bottom right, but I really had to look for it and didn't notice it anywhere else
No, thanks.
Same, it wouldn't be better if she was raped by guys either.
I kinda bet the demon girl also has a penis so I kinda don't understand the usage of a yuri tag here if whole content of this is an omegaverse play where girls are fucked by futanari girls.
If you had trouble figuring out what was going on then you should try actually reading it is incredibly obvious.
"Try actually reading it".
Yeah...good luck with that. The writing was often largely all over the place.
Okay do me a solid then. Give an idea where to look. outside of the shopkeep saying something that implied the demonkind girl was getting a hard-on, I saw nothing stating overtly that she was futa.
I'm pretty sure that's a dong on page 15 bottom right, but I really had to look for it and didn't notice it anywhere else
Nope, sorry. I'm not seeing a dong. I will say that position does suggest she has one though.
No, thanks.
Same, it wouldn't be better if she was raped by guys either.
I kinda bet the demon girl also has a penis so I kinda don't understand the usage of a yuri tag here if whole content of this is an omegaverse play where girls are fucked by futanari girls.
I also feel that omegaverse isn't yuri, with the possible exception of a two female bata, or a two female omega pairing.
I'm just going to say that it's a bad story because the first time i spoke badly about a futa story, i humiliated, so i better keep quiet i just don't want to get in trouble again
